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Nebulous Dawn

Nebulous angels vacant worth Foresee no fortunes adulate Dawn's desecrated, faithless birth Supine mother to stillborn fate 2/21/20 For 'Poe-etic Verse' contest sponsor: charles messina Shared 2nd Place

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John Watt

Date: 3/8/2020 10:47:00 PM

A little late to the party, I'm afraid, in wishing you well-earned congratulations for your Poe win. Brief, but oh, so Poe-ish! "Supine mother to stillborn fate" - exquisite! Hugs ~ John

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/9/2020 12:45:00 AM

Always happy for a comment from you, thank you, John-

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/8/2020 9:36:00 PM

Michelle, I love the creative use of language, alliteration and the deep darkness of this poetic gem. Your artistry shines in this black pearl. A fav! Congratulations on a well deserved win, my friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/9/2020 12:44:00 AM

I am so grateful for your lovely comments, appreciate it, Susan-

Charles Messina

Date: 3/4/2020 6:18:00 AM

Awesome write, Michelle. So many great entries and this is amongst them. Well done! Congrats on your winning placement. Hugs Charlie

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/8/2020 12:03:00 PM

I appreciate your placement of my poem in your contest, thank you!

Jenish Somadas

Date: 3/2/2020 10:52:00 PM

Wonderful win Michelle.. Congrats..

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 3/8/2020 12:02:00 PM

Thank you, Jenish-

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/24/2020 11:43:00 AM

Hi Michelle, I'm sure this poem will be a win, it is a sincere, sad write but truly talented and poe-etic! Best wishes. Jennifer.

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/28/2020 5:19:00 PM

I am flattered, thank you, Jennifer-

Sandra Adams

Date: 2/23/2020 8:14:00 PM

wow… this is powerful and poignant... very Poe-etic in my opinion... great write! best wishes in the contest! hugs

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/28/2020 5:17:00 PM

Appreciate it, thank you, Sandra-

Eve Roper

Date: 2/23/2020 2:50:00 PM

Deep and very poetic verse, Michelle, good luck in the contest. Eve

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/23/2020 3:49:00 PM

Thank you for commenting, Eve-

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/22/2020 11:09:00 PM

Grim and grisly, but certainly poe-tic! Great job, with or without the contest. :) Gershon

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/23/2020 3:48:00 PM

Poe makes me think 'elegant despair' so I went in that direction - appreciate your comment, Gershon!

John Watt

Date: 2/22/2020 1:22:00 PM

A dark and dismal take on dawn, Michelle. GL in the Poe contest ~ John

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/22/2020 7:23:00 PM

I appreciate your taking the time to read and comment, John-

Arturo Michael

Date: 2/22/2020 6:08:00 AM

Like the chant of a spell...I like it

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/22/2020 7:22:00 PM

I am glad for your comment, Thank you, Arturo-

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 2/21/2020 10:14:00 PM

Woah, thick and dark as pitch, this is fiendish fun to recite out loud. ~Poe-dium... ;), xomo!

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/21/2020 11:30:00 PM

Love the pun}

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/21/2020 4:52:00 PM

Yes, these creatively-composed lines do sound Poe-ish! :-) Janice

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/21/2020 4:54:00 PM

Thank you kindly, Janice-

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/21/2020 3:59:00 PM

Very Poe-Etic lines Michelle, my first attempt was long, like war and peace lol, after reading some of poes work I had to really trim it down. Enjoy your weekend. Tom

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 2/21/2020 4:53:00 PM

You as well, thanks for commenting, Tom!