Michelle Faulkner Poet Verse

Nebulous Dawn

Nebulous angels vacant worth
Foresee no fortunes adulate
Dawn's desecrated, faithless birth
Supine mother to stillborn fate

2/21/20

For 'Poe-etic Verse' contest
sponsor: charles messina

Shared 2nd Place

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John Watt March 8, 2020 at 10:47 PM A little late to the party, I'm afraid, in wishing you well-earned congratulations for your Poe win. Brief, but oh, so Poe-ish! "Supine mother to stillborn fate" - exquisite! Hugs ~ John Michelle Faulkner March 9, 2020 at 12:45 AM Always happy for a comment from you, thank you, John-

Susan Ashley March 8, 2020 at 9:36 PM Michelle, I love the creative use of language, alliteration and the deep darkness of this poetic gem. Your artistry shines in this black pearl. A fav! Congratulations on a well deserved win, my friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan Michelle Faulkner March 9, 2020 at 12:44 AM I am so grateful for your lovely comments, appreciate it, Susan-

Charles Messina March 4, 2020 at 6:18 AM Awesome write, Michelle. So many great entries and this is amongst them. Well done! Congrats on your winning placement. Hugs Charlie Michelle Faulkner March 8, 2020 at 12:03 PM I appreciate your placement of my poem in your contest, thank you!

Jenish Somadas March 2, 2020 at 10:52 PM Wonderful win Michelle.. Congrats.. Michelle Faulkner March 8, 2020 at 12:02 PM Thank you, Jenish-

Jennifer Proxenos February 24, 2020 at 11:43 AM Hi Michelle, I'm sure this poem will be a win, it is a sincere, sad write but truly talented and poe-etic! Best wishes. Jennifer. Michelle Faulkner February 28, 2020 at 5:19 PM I am flattered, thank you, Jennifer-

Sandra Adams February 23, 2020 at 8:14 PM wow… this is powerful and poignant... very Poe-etic in my opinion... great write! best wishes in the contest! hugs Michelle Faulkner February 28, 2020 at 5:17 PM Appreciate it, thank you, Sandra-

Eve Roper February 23, 2020 at 2:50 PM Deep and very poetic verse, Michelle, good luck in the contest. Eve Michelle Faulkner February 23, 2020 at 3:49 PM Thank you for commenting, Eve-

Gershon Wolf February 22, 2020 at 11:09 PM Grim and grisly, but certainly poe-tic! Great job, with or without the contest. :) Gershon Michelle Faulkner February 23, 2020 at 3:48 PM Poe makes me think 'elegant despair' so I went in that direction - appreciate your comment, Gershon!

John Watt February 22, 2020 at 1:22 PM A dark and dismal take on dawn, Michelle. GL in the Poe contest ~ John Michelle Faulkner February 22, 2020 at 7:23 PM I appreciate your taking the time to read and comment, John-

Arturo Michael February 22, 2020 at 6:08 AM Like the chant of a spell...I like it Michelle Faulkner February 22, 2020 at 7:22 PM I am glad for your comment, Thank you, Arturo-

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart February 21, 2020 at 10:14 PM Woah, thick and dark as pitch, this is fiendish fun to recite out loud. ~Poe-dium... ;), xomo! Michelle Faulkner February 21, 2020 at 11:30 PM Love the pun}

Janice Canerdy February 21, 2020 at 4:52 PM Yes, these creatively-composed lines do sound Poe-ish! :-) Janice Michelle Faulkner February 21, 2020 at 4:54 PM Thank you kindly, Janice-

Tom Cunningham February 21, 2020 at 3:59 PM Very Poe-Etic lines Michelle, my first attempt was long, like war and peace lol, after reading some of poes work I had to really trim it down. Enjoy your weekend. Tom Michelle Faulkner February 21, 2020 at 4:53 PM You as well, thanks for commenting, Tom!