Nebula Seeker

This worrying view
Today on earth
Is it the end of life
For all it's worth

An angry sky
Overhead
Cold blues
Atmosphere dead

Clouds of gas
From interstellar space
Stratosphere breached
Alien face

But out of the hue
A face in the clouds
Nebula seeker
Her shroud crowds

This nebulae
Of particle dust
Energy of gas
The seeker com-busts

Angry exchange
In our skies above
Two galactic entities
Hemispherical shove

As the sky quietens
A bright star dares
To reveal its place
As we look up and stare

Calmness oozes
As the seeker sleeps
Gentle rains fall
The sky in tribute weeps


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Date: 7/14/2009 10:34:00 AM
How beautiful those final words are I think they transfixed me .. gorgeous Loved this one James ... Love Jayne x
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Date: 7/12/2009 9:53:00 AM
Wonderful poetry James,..it will go well with my gazing at the summer clouds today !! james
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Date: 7/11/2009 10:29:00 PM
this is beautiful,a bright star in all that angry cold sky--love the words you used,words we use in science,i love the way you combined the universe with love--great different write--charma
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Date: 7/11/2009 8:05:00 PM
As usual my dear I am at a loss for words....soup mail
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Date: 7/11/2009 7:08:00 PM
inspirational! James!!
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Date: 7/11/2009 5:44:00 PM
very visual, i really enjoy this one
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Date: 7/11/2009 5:43:00 PM
Nice work, I love writing about space and time...Raul
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Date: 7/11/2009 5:04:00 PM
Great fantasy. Sara
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