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Nebula Seeker

This worrying view Today on earth Is it the end of life For all it's worth An angry sky Overhead Cold blues Atmosphere dead Clouds of gas From interstellar space Stratosphere breached Alien face But out of the hue A face in the clouds Nebula seeker Her shroud crowds This nebulae Of particle dust Energy of gas The seeker com-busts Angry exchange In our skies above Two galactic entities Hemispherical shove As the sky quietens A bright star dares To reveal its place As we look up and stare Calmness oozes As the seeker sleeps Gentle rains fall The sky in tribute weeps http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/space.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/14/2009 10:34:00 AM
How beautiful those final words are I think they transfixed me .. gorgeous Loved this one James ... Love Jayne x
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Date: 7/12/2009 9:53:00 AM
Wonderful poetry James,..it will go well with my gazing at the summer clouds today !! james
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Date: 7/11/2009 10:29:00 PM
this is beautiful,a bright star in all that angry cold sky--love the words you used,words we use in science,i love the way you combined the universe with love--great different write--charma
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Date: 7/11/2009 8:05:00 PM
As usual my dear I am at a loss for words....soup mail
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Date: 7/11/2009 7:08:00 PM
inspirational! James!!
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Date: 7/11/2009 5:44:00 PM
very visual, i really enjoy this one
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Date: 7/11/2009 5:43:00 PM
Nice work, I love writing about space and time...Raul
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Date: 7/11/2009 5:04:00 PM
Great fantasy. Sara
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