Nebula Nights:

Nebula nights,
Upon starry skies,
Capture my soul.
        /|\
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 7:43 PM
A good first foray into a challenging poetic format, Rick. Kudos to you for exploring it. I will post my first Senryu shortly. Good job and a nice poem, my friend.
Wolf Avatar
October 10, 2016 at 4:26 PM
Yes it was only my first or second attempt at Senryu, got so much to learn on the different forms, Tar Freddie /|\
A   Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 5:05 PM
Rick, you are doing this right... I don't usually enjoy senryu. However, this was perfect and you captured a moment, I enjoy every now and then... luv linda
Wolf Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 5:52 PM
Thank you for dropping by Linda, and I'm glad I did it right and that you enjoyed it, Cheers /|\
Allison Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 7:29 AM
I have got Don Mclean's starry starry night going through my head reading these lovely lines Rick:-) hugs jan xx
Wolf Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 7:46 AM
oh that's a classic song, I'm glad I placed it there now. I changed it to a senryu now... Thank you, and big hugs back /|\
Gupta Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 4:25 AM
Starlight haiku ... Nebula nice ...
Wolf Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 4:48 AM
Thank you, Probir. I'm slowly trying new forms, I find this one a challenge, /|\
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