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'neath Shimmering Waves

'Neath shimmering waves

   Gallant heroes lie asleep

      Waiting salvation

Entry for Tania Kitchen's "Ocean Waves" Contest
(27 January 2019)

oceanhaiku

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Jan Allison

Date: 2/1/2019 8:27:00 PM

lovely tribute Bob many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 2/1/2019 5:01:00 PM

Good for you Bob...a wonderful tribute. Congrats. BG

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/31/2019 3:33:00 PM

wow... starling end line for our heroes, bob... big congrats on your award!..huggs

Charlie Smith

Date: 1/31/2019 11:44:00 AM

Your on a roll Bob, Congrats again...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/30/2019 6:37:00 PM

congrats on your worthy win with your tribute poem.

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/30/2019 5:03:00 PM

Congratulations, on this winner, love the poem, so vivid.

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 1/30/2019 8:24:00 PM

Thank you, Harry, for your gracious comment. I cherish your support and encouragement - bob

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/29/2019 8:03:00 AM

- I'm back with congratulations, Bob - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/28/2019 9:26:00 PM

Hi Robert, What a well written tribute piece to fallen heros. Well done. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 1/29/2019 10:47:00 AM

Thank you Alexis for your kind comment - Bob

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/28/2019 7:49:00 PM

Congrats on your well deserved podium finish, Robert.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/28/2019 7:30:00 PM

Bob, great imagery, I could picture large sunken ships, congratulations on your winning placement!

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 1/29/2019 10:48:00 AM

Thanks, Tania, for considering my entry in your contest worthy of a win - Bob

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/28/2019 4:22:00 AM

- One of the best, very great described - Best wishes in the contest, Bob :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Lawless

Date: 1/27/2019 9:52:00 PM

well done with a subtle historic reference.

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 1/28/2019 10:54:00 AM

Thank you, John. Glad you picked up on the historic reference which was my intent in working this one up. Great to hear from you and best to you as time goes on - Bob