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'neath Illogicalness

Brazenly stared within the

    irony of irrational horizons,

shadows colorlessly implanted on

             an oasis of silent sand dunes - -

       no footprints were visible in her wake,

tidal waves lilted in roaring disobedience

        kinking temperaments' permanence,

reflective intimation no longer visible

    beyond mirrors cruel unimportance

          blindfolded in a peculiar fashion,

      realities' ghostly animated particles

        toppled under relevant significance

           to the depths of modified senescence,

   releasing disembodied spirit held its own

     midst lofty persuasion's undulations,

   nullified 'tween composition's banality 

      somewhere mid fantasy & ascertained ashes,

descent upon apparent illogicalness transpired as

      transcendent lucidity mocked hazed transparency,

   naked truths became clearer as they blurred into 

   ludicrous relinquishment 'tween rebellious renditions,

      whilst flimsy breaths reprised figment's fanciful betrayal

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/6/2016 3:30:00 PM
"Brazenly stared within the irony of irrational horizons, shadows colorlessly implanted on an oasis of silent sand dunes - -" I almost stopped right here, this opening stanza just blew me away. I wanted to linger here for a bit and let this wonderful collection of words and phrases sink in. I did however finish this and found myself wanting to copy and paste more, but there's only so much room in this little box. This was amazing Paloma. Like Freddie said...unique.
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Date: 12/6/2016 12:14:00 PM
Very cool dissident poem, Paloma. You're style is so avant-garde. You're unique, you're the best at what you do. Betrayed by their own figments, eh. So cool. Love this poem though. A straight 7. Love always, lady.
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