'Neath Dark Waters

   placid… the surface …

   not one ripple seen… though ‘neath

     dark waters ~ sharks preen
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Rodrigues Avatar
March 25, 2024 at 11:33 AM
Many don’t want to see how murky the dark waters.
Greenhough Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 9:43 PM
Sharks are the reason I don't desire ocean swimming. This is a good poem. It may save a life.
Tor Avatar
March 24, 2024 at 9:24 PM
Not everything seems like it is. Love your theme Gershon and the dichotomy at the end. A favorite...
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