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Image result for pictures of a deceased female in the grass near a railroad

Neat Town

neat manicured town
hiatus near the railroad....
nude female body  

Date: February 08, 2021
Contest: Hiatus Poetry
Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2021

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February 23, 2021 at 10:56 AM

touching ~

February 16, 2021 at 10:19 AM

Behind the picket fences.... Great write Sara

February 16, 2021 at 10:44 AM

Gary, Yes, behind the picket fence. Sometimes though murder happens behind those picket fences. Your presence at my page is uplifting. Sara

February 14, 2021 at 12:45 PM

Thought-provoking imagery. Things tied up with a neat pretty bow aren't always what they seem. Well-crafted.

February 14, 2021 at 1:18 PM

Gail, So true. Probably there had never been a murder there before that day or night. Sara

February 10, 2021 at 6:59 PM

This hiatus is rather riotous! :) gw

February 11, 2021 at 7:04 AM

Gershon, A person could take this one in many ways. I wasn't expecting your response but I can see how with the picture you could see it differently. Thanks for all your visits. Sara

Caren Krutsinger

February 8, 2021 at 9:57 PM

Wow. You stopped me in my tracks.

February 9, 2021 at 5:11 AM

Caren, I am glad it gave a startled ending. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

February 8, 2021 at 2:24 PM

not such a neat town any more!!

February 9, 2021 at 5:11 AM

Andrea, I was referring to its well kept look but it could have meant a nice place to live. Until they catch the killer it will be a place of fear for the residents. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

February 8, 2021 at 11:00 AM

One can interpret this in many way but I assume she's dead. Bit cold for the happening. ~~

Rama Balasubramanian

February 8, 2021 at 6:33 AM

Great entry for contest. Looks like a winner to me. Take care. God bless Rama

February 8, 2021 at 2:17 PM

Rama, Thanks for the confidence for me in the contest. Sara

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