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neat manicured town hiatus near the railroad.... nude female body
Date: February 08, 2021 Contest: Hiatus Poetry Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 2/23/2021 10:56:00 AM
touching ~
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Date: 2/16/2021 10:19:00 AM
Behind the picket fences.... Great write Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/16/2021 10:44:00 AM
Gary, Yes, behind the picket fence. Sometimes though murder happens behind those picket fences. Your presence at my page is uplifting. Sara
Date: 2/14/2021 12:45:00 PM
Thought-provoking imagery. Things tied up with a neat pretty bow aren't always what they seem. Well-crafted.
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Date: 2/14/2021 1:18:00 PM
Gail, So true. Probably there had never been a murder there before that day or night. Sara
Date: 2/10/2021 6:59:00 PM
This hiatus is rather riotous! :) gw
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/11/2021 7:04:00 AM
Gershon, A person could take this one in many ways. I wasn't expecting your response but I can see how with the picture you could see it differently. Thanks for all your visits. Sara
Date: 2/8/2021 9:57:00 PM
Wow. You stopped me in my tracks.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/9/2021 5:11:00 AM
Caren, I am glad it gave a startled ending. Sara
Date: 2/8/2021 2:24:00 PM
not such a neat town any more!!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/9/2021 5:11:00 AM
Andrea, I was referring to its well kept look but it could have meant a nice place to live. Until they catch the killer it will be a place of fear for the residents. Sara
Date: 2/8/2021 11:00:00 AM
One can interpret this in many way but I assume she's dead. Bit cold for the happening. ~~
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Date: 2/8/2021 6:33:00 AM
Great entry for contest. Looks like a winner to me. Take care. God bless Rama
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/8/2021 2:17:00 PM
Rama, Thanks for the confidence for me in the contest. Sara

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