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Nearly Blew My Head Off

The magic of love in those early years So intense, so filled with suspense What would it be like, that very first kiss The feeling was so so intense Just about more than I could bare The anticipation, the longing to know What all the older guys were raving about “Making out” in the back row of the show Eventually my time did finally arrive Nearly blew my head off my shoulders And that was only my very first kiss What came later made me utterly smoulder Won't go into detail but holy frigging crap Sure made my temperature rise Got all sweaty, totally forgot who I was Greeted all my friends with high fives Then I knew what all the fuss was about Sure haven't forgotten it since In fact, I consider myself a professional now Could teach about love I'm convinced Those fun filled days have long since departed Only memories are left to remember But holy cadoodle what a wonderful journey As I'm nearing my month of December

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Date: 6/25/2023 6:40:00 PM
You paint a vivid picture, love it.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/26/2023 4:02:00 AM
You are very kind dear friend... thank you muchly!!! XOX
Date: 6/22/2023 3:31:00 PM
..life fantasies really were lifejackets back then....now life's a consistency time river with a few whirlpools etc.......stan
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/23/2023 3:05:00 AM
It's those whirlpools one needs to watch out for!!! Cheers to you Stan
Date: 6/22/2023 2:27:00 PM
Humorous and Poinant, a very fun read. Love the colloquialism too these make you lol. Like "holy cadoodle" :-D
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/23/2023 3:02:00 AM
Love having fun don't you? Come back for more... love, happy Jack
Date: 6/22/2023 8:31:00 AM
Jack your passion is written my friend. Your very first kiss who could forget? Thanks for sharing my friend...
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/22/2023 9:51:00 AM
Not a chance Michael! Her name was Janice "Valentine"! Imagine that! Have a great day my friend!
Date: 6/22/2023 6:07:00 AM
Memories is about it in that month of December. I enjoyed reading your work. Sara
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Jack Ellison
Date: 6/22/2023 7:30:00 AM
Yes... the month of December is just around the corner!!! Comes right after June! lol XOX

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