Nearly a Sonnet

When soon this life's course is nearly run,
And nightly retreating into deep thought:-
Faded, half-remembered memories fraught
With half-made pledges all gone undone.

Yonder sits Hermes slumped in his chair;
Hands clasped, bearded chin on his chest.
In troubling dreams he knows no rest...
Nor in quiet contemplation or in prayer.

He has cast aside all God like passions;        
Cap hung on a peg, winged sandals slipped;
Dumbed tongue that once had fashioned
Wondrous words hidden behind pursed lips. 

Masculine limbs, in youth, so keen to leap!
Now stretched out in exhausted sleep.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Roper Avatar
March 18, 2020 at 3:09 PM
Exhausted of strife and painful memories he ; Sits in humble rest, words hidden behind lips. Shill we never turn our backs on God.
Fleming Avatar
March 27, 2020 at 7:26 AM
Thank you, Eve...always a very warm welcome for you here. Cheers! :) john
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February 9, 2020 at 4:17 PM
It is very difficult for an active person to slow down as they age. My husband and me both struggle with accepting it. A wonderful poem John, worded in your usual brilliant way! xxoo
Fleming Avatar
February 10, 2020 at 12:43 AM
Thank you, Connie! And thank you for all your generous and unstinting support regarding my humble scribbling over the years...it is more appreciated than you know. Your good friend always. :) john
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February 5, 2020 at 8:53 AM
Cannot imagine you heading "south" very soon, Tommy: you of the evergreen soul. Allow me to add that you are always most welcome here...I really do particularly enjoy your very own special brand of humour, comments and critique. My warmest regards! :) john P.s good people like yourself encourage me to carry on trying to write provocative poetry...I am more grateful than you could ever know.
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March 27, 2020 at 7:52 AM
I too have just noticed that he has now gone again, Eve. I agree most heartily about him being "a great guy". Let us hope "Son of Spock" returns very soon reincarnated in his newest form. My very best regards! :) john P.s In the near future the world may well need good men like him.
Roper Avatar
March 18, 2020 at 2:54 PM
If this is about Tommy "Son of Spock" , yes he is a great guy.. I just noticed his page is gone.. I am sorry he is gone.
Chiri Avatar
February 3, 2020 at 6:25 AM
Ahhh see John I told you that you would nail it my dear! Love it John your ability to amaze is astounding!;)
Chiri Avatar
February 5, 2020 at 2:27 PM
Ahh John how sweet of you to say! But you are the true poet my dear I am but a simple student awaiting your comments!;) hugs!
Fleming Avatar
February 3, 2020 at 8:43 AM
Thank you, Poetess...you are pretty darn good yourself you know. Always greatly appreciate your enthusiastic encouragement...you know how much I value your opinions -- so very pleased you enjoyed it!! With much fondness. :) john
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