Near the Old Tree

There..
you'll learn everything
Perhaps .. a girl will love you near the old tree
And you forget this ugly world
There .. 
you will look nicer,
And probably you will write a lot of poems,
And do not think too much in its names,
Because the stars above you will be close ..
Closer than you think !
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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February 18, 2016 at 11:15 AM
DIA, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 7:42 PM
Dheya, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
Deschler Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 12:29 AM
I enjoyed reading these encouraging words of hope for the future. A nice poem, Dheya!
Kendrick Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 3:38 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative and expressive work..Way to go..Welcome to soup..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Muideen Avatar
May 8, 2015 at 6:47 AM
Wow!what an interesting and enjoyable piece,I love it. Excellent work.
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May 8, 2015 at 9:15 AM
Thank you my friend for your reading what I wrote .. I wish you all the best
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