Near Death People

All wired up for a couple of days Doc said check him for a blood pressure raise Said not to worry On the contrary Happens to a lot of us in the final phase
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De Beaulieu Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 12:40 PM
Hello Happy Jack, I want to hug you. You sound depressed. Be on the positive side. You have many years ahead of you. Love, Darlene xxxx-oooo.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 3:35 PM
Hello Happy Jack, it sounds good to me as well. Yes you are an up beat guy. Love, Darlene xx-oo.
Ellison Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 2:08 PM
My remaining sister is 93... sounds good eh! I'm not as depressed as I sound! I'm normally an upbeat honcho!!! XOX
Cunningham Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 10:47 AM
Hang in there Jack your contract on here is for another 20 odd years. Tom
M  Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 7:50 PM
Jack that made me laugh ….go poo poo!! You’re funny! Debx
Ellison Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 2:04 PM
Uh that would make me 106!!! Holy. crap... the thought of it makes me go poo poo! LOL
Hankins Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 9:40 AM
So true. I'm not a big fan of the final days. I pray they will be brief, if at all. Just going to sleep and never waking up sounds terrific to me.
Ellison Avatar
October 26, 2021 at 2:00 PM
That scenario is absolutely THE best!!!!!! Hasn't happened to me yet but how would be able to let you know anyway! LOL
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