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Near Death People

All wired up for a couple of days Doc said check him for a blood pressure raise Said not to worry On the contrary Happens to a lot of us in the final phase

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/26/2021 12:40:00 PM

Hello Happy Jack, I want to hug you. You sound depressed. Be on the positive side. You have many years ahead of you. Love, Darlene xxxx-oooo.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/26/2021 3:35:00 PM

Hello Happy Jack, it sounds good to me as well. Yes you are an up beat guy. Love, Darlene xx-oo.

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/26/2021 2:08:00 PM

My remaining sister is 93... sounds good eh! I'm not as depressed as I sound! I'm normally an upbeat honcho!!! XOX

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/26/2021 10:47:00 AM

Hang in there Jack your contract on here is for another 20 odd years. Tom

Deb M
Date: 10/26/2021 7:50:00 PM

Jack that made me laugh ….go poo poo!! You’re funny! Debx

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/26/2021 2:04:00 PM

Uh that would make me 106!!! Holy. crap... the thought of it makes me go poo poo! LOL

L Milton Hankins

Date: 10/26/2021 9:40:00 AM

So true. I'm not a big fan of the final days. I pray they will be brief, if at all. Just going to sleep and never waking up sounds terrific to me.

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/26/2021 2:00:00 PM

That scenario is absolutely THE best!!!!!! Hasn't happened to me yet but how would be able to let you know anyway! LOL