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Near Death Nightmare

My memories are still as clear; I feel each night that death is near. With a sigh, I close my eyes and hope to see the light - people say it's blinding white... And then I visualise: My wife is there, her arms outstretched. Again, I shout, 'I will not die.' And if my story sounds far fetched, then tell yourself I simply lie! But that is why I'm still alive - though born in eighteen sixty-five! written 27th April for Chantelle's Near Death Experience contest

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Date: 9/19/2022 3:59:00 PM
I am so glad I never met your wife, Jack: She will live in infamy….lol SuZ
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Date: 5/21/2022 2:34:00 PM
Jack my friend how are you this though a nightmare is cleverly crafted and really funny. Hugs and blessings Jennifer
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Date: 5/5/2022 9:10:00 AM
It is definitely not the fear of death, but the fear of being reunited with the wife, lol :) ~ Best regards // paul
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Date: 5/4/2022 4:07:00 PM
Dearest Jack, your intriguing poem is framed with wonderful rhythm and rhymes and finished with a great twist. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 5/1/2022 4:13:00 AM
Love the twist in the final line, Jack:)
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Date: 4/30/2022 7:23:00 PM
Wow, Jack so scary, but love the deepness of the mind set here.
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Date: 4/29/2022 2:02:00 PM
Interesting poem, Jack ~ spooky, too :)
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Date: 4/27/2022 4:23:00 PM
WoW! And I thought I was getting old! Great story Jack told with great rhyme and meter. God Bless, JB
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Date: 4/27/2022 3:54:00 PM
Enjoyed your write Jack and those nightmares can take us to strange places. Hope you both are keeping well. We are. love phyl
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