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Neapolitan Delight

raspberry pink clouds
sit above bright sunny day
floats over rich dark earth
~*~

For PD's Neapolitan Haiku Contest
      in honor of Gwen Rix

10/2011
*9th Place

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Robert Pettit

January 7, 2012 at 3:15 PM

Nice way to describe the earth in vanilla, chocolate, and strawberry (or raspberry) flavors. Good write.

John Rhinem

November 20, 2011 at 4:19 PM

Ps. Smile * The One's I Love * Always & Forever, John *

John Rhinem

November 19, 2011 at 9:57 AM

Smileahhhyesssmyluvyessss

Sarah Seraphin

October 28, 2011 at 6:36 PM

* “Owww * I Love This Neopolitans Moment * Sounds As A Paradises Moment My Dear Beautiful Annalise * As I Sooo Sincerely Said Unto Another The Other Day * I Adore Delicious Chocolate * Your Beauty Brushed A Very Enticing Portrait * Sooo Beautiful * Luv * Sarah.” *

Carolyn Devonshire

October 21, 2011 at 5:06 PM

Thanks for stopping by, Annalise. I hope we can talk when I get home. Congrats again on your win! Love, Carolyn

Matthew Anish

October 12, 2011 at 5:52 PM

Makes me hungry! Richly descriptive! Peace and Love Matthew Anish

Audrey Haick

October 13, 2011 at 2:03 PM

Hi Matt! I assume it's a rainy day for you too, but go treat yourself to some ice cream anyway! Peace and love back at you. Have a good day!

Joe Maverick

October 12, 2011 at 3:16 PM

I think this unique piece May be just a "trifle rich...Annalise, oh do hope that was not heresy...trifle indeed:) anyway i think it may keep you up at night ingesting wise} hovever i totaly enjoyed it..and.......CONGRATULATIONS..!

Audrey Haick

October 13, 2011 at 2:00 PM

Haha! No worries, Joe. : ) I'm glad you enjoyed it. As for ingesting it at night, yes, I get into trouble but as long as it's none of that "Fat Free" stuff, I splurge every now and then; and a little pepto bismal helps LOL Thanks my friend!

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 7, 2011 at 8:16 AM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Neapolitan Ice Cream (Haiku)" contest Annalise. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick

October 13, 2011 at 2:05 PM

Thank you dear Carol. Hope your day is going well!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

October 7, 2011 at 12:56 AM

Congrats Annalise on a top ten win with this yummy sweet treat of analogies..luv..

Audrey Haick

October 13, 2011 at 2:11 PM

Thank you my friend. I pray all is well. I don't visit too often but when I do I enjoy my favorites here and you are still one of them. Have a good day!

Gwendolen Song

October 6, 2011 at 11:27 PM

Oh wow, Annalise. This was in honor ME? Wow. ....That Poet Destroyer, I'm gonna get her. hah ha. Capturing the essence of food and nature was somewhat difficult in my write. I tho't u rocked this one so well. I was envisioning a super clear sky on a sunny day...I would have to devour the rich dark earth first tho. lol. Congrats on such a awesome write. ----soup mail. Gwendolen

Audrey Haick

October 13, 2011 at 2:18 PM

Yes! The contest was sponsored in your honor by PD. That was really sweet of her. Glad you enjoyed this. After reading all the many Haikus I really need some ice cream! Thanks for the comment, my friend. Love, Annalise

Iolanda Scripca

October 6, 2011 at 11:08 PM

Yummy Haiku, dear Annalise! Congrats too and thanks for your comments. Love, iolanda

Audrey Haick

October 13, 2011 at 2:21 PM

Thanks Iolanda. Hope your day is going well, God bless. Love, Annalise

Lee Ramage

October 6, 2011 at 10:56 PM

Ah, beautiful poem, just love it Well done. Lee

Audrey Haick

October 13, 2011 at 2:27 PM

Thank you very much, Lee. I appreciate your kindness and taking the time to leave a comment for me. Hope your day is going well! Love, Annalise

Carolyn Devonshire

October 6, 2011 at 1:54 PM

A true haiku with a neapolitan portrait of nature. Great write, Annalise. Congratulations and love, Carolyn

Audrey Haick

October 13, 2011 at 2:15 PM

Thank you for your always genuine and kind comments Seafaress. I'm here today for a little while and trying to catch up with my PS "to do" list. Love, Annalise

Poet Destroyer A

October 6, 2011 at 12:01 PM

DEAR ANNA~.. CONGRATULATIONS,, FOR YOUR WONDERFUL AND SWEET ENTRY... GOD BLESS YOU,..ALWAYS,..P.D.

Audrey Haick

October 13, 2011 at 2:20 PM

Thanks for the compliments, P.D. God bless you too. Love, Annalise

Andrea Dietrich

October 6, 2011 at 12:38 AM

Great neapolitan nature theme, Annalise!! It has all the right ingredients!

Jl Sadberry

October 3, 2011 at 6:57 PM

Smile, *^_^* “Hello My Dear Precious & Priceless Annalise! *^_^* What A Very Lovely & Picturesque Image Your Beauty Has Brushed Amid This Pretty Painting *^_^* A Reflection of Your Own Colourful & Tender Heart I Would Believe My Dear &, Sorry I Haven't Been By As of Late Yet, Here Am I *^_^* To Say Thank You, for Your Splendours Lovely Coms; Very Vanilla, Chocolate & Strawberry Sweet, My Dear!” === My Love Unto You Always & Forever, Jasper *

Audrey Haick

October 13, 2011 at 2:24 PM

Hey JL. Sorry I'm just getting to this but it's never too late to say "Thank you", my friend. I too am unable to come as often but when I do, you know that I go check out my favs first and you're one of them always. Hope you're doing well!? Love, Annalise