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I saw you freshly bathed With glowing soft skin, Earth, moon in your hair. I remember your look, Grey-blue eyes piercing, Through my desiring heart. Those eyes leaning down The greenest of things blue The bluest of things grey. Your fuller pouty lower lip, Inviting my upper to touch Ah, it makes me nervous. I don’t need to get the tips, Beautiful lips sink ships, Increase one’s heart beats. Aren’t you ready to claim? What nature gave you in full? Here I navigate your body. ===================== Honorable Mention' Contest: A Warm Embrace

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Date: 6/18/2010 4:32:00 AM
who so hot with so few words....you're the man! Nice one here! Light & Love
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Date: 6/16/2010 9:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in John Heck's contest "A Warm Embrace" Dr. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/13/2010 8:55:00 AM
WooHooo- Getting hot and steamy there, Doc! This was really great. congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/12/2010 4:40:00 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your winning poem in the Warm Embrace contest.. just luv this write so enjoy your success.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/12/2010 4:04:00 PM
congratulations, it was wonderful. LUv, andrea
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Date: 6/12/2010 3:22:00 PM
Oh yes...I remember this one well, and it is no surprise to see this lovely poem in the winner's circle. My congratulations! ~ Carrie
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Date: 6/9/2010 7:49:00 PM
Well done Dr. Ram, enjoyed the navagation all the way till the end, have a nice one,..p.d.
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Date: 6/9/2010 6:50:00 PM
This is great. The seduction intertwined with pure romance is really beautiful. Takes one deeper into the essence of it all.
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Date: 6/8/2010 8:39:00 PM
This is a very different kind of luv poem Dr. Ram but I like this Verse form and your words of expression .. to navigate your luv .. and the use of lips is fabulous.. a sensual journey.. my surgery is finished now..only allowed on computer one hour .. am a brave lady.. keep going all the time.. appreciate your concern.. thankxx.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/8/2010 7:50:00 PM
this is nice and sensuous, Dr. Ram. And guess what? You are desciribing MY eyes too. I have those green eyes that look more grey/blue than anything. Does your wife have eyes like described here? that "lullaby" type poem I wrote many years ago and I thought, oh, wow, I actually think I have a poem about "affection" and so I raced to find it for the contest. REally hard to find beneath all my files! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 6/8/2010 1:18:00 PM
Very nice. I love your sensuality. Thanks for all the nice comments. Scarlett
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Date: 6/8/2010 12:48:00 PM
I love it all, but especially the last line. "Sailing, sailing." Isn't there a song? Love, daver
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Date: 6/8/2010 10:13:00 AM
Ah! Navigate the mind ......Very passionate and sensual...Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
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Date: 6/8/2010 8:44:00 AM
There are many options , Daniel Cwiak
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Date: 6/8/2010 7:35:00 AM
Quite sensual, calmly beautiful and lovely....nicely done, Dr. Ram.
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Date: 6/8/2010 7:35:00 AM
Great title for this poem! Who would think of a person to navigate except a doctor? Dan C
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Date: 6/8/2010 3:25:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem today, Dr. Ram and thanks for your kind comments1 Have a nice days, Gert
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