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Naughty Yet Innocent Premiere Contest Winner

NAUGHTY YET INNOCENT She’s young and oh so innocent, naughty at times can be. Depending on the time of day, but nights … especially. Daytime she likes to play around, In one place never stay. Makes you wonder where she’s going, but only time … will say. When crawling towards you on her knees, she takes your breath away. You sweep her up into your arms, her presence … makes your day. Nighttime she’s unpredictable, quite demanding can be. Desires and needs unsatiable both dead tired … around three. She gets naughty when bottle wants, screams, and loud, known to get. Innocent behavior, because, she’s just two … don’t forget! March 5, 2022 Rhyme Contest sponsor: Mohan Chutani NAUGHTY YET INNOCENT

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Date: 8/31/2023 10:50:00 PM
This is great!
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Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 9/3/2023 12:25:00 PM
Wow! Hello, I'm glad you found my site, will visit you now that we have met. Thanks again
Date: 8/5/2022 1:41:00 AM
Wow! I love this a lot. So cute, delightful and sweet. I'm glad i came here again and found this outstanding poem of yours my dear friend Barbara. Sorry for the late read. Big Congratulations on your well-deserved trophy win my dear friend! Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always and your writings always..
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Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 8/7/2022 1:13:00 AM
Len, how kind of you to be so specific in your comments, means a lot. I too am so late in so many things. Thanks for reconnecting, I will do the same.
Date: 6/29/2022 8:14:00 PM
I bottle-fed my girls at nite when they were babies, in their 30's now, best time of my life! Good poem Barbara!
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Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 8/7/2022 1:11:00 AM
James, When children are young, I agree, are the best years . Thanks for visiting. Come again.
Date: 5/8/2022 3:04:00 PM
This is both fun and hilarious at the same time! Love the “reveal” at the end…a well deserved trophy win! :)
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Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 8/7/2022 1:10:00 AM
Laura, thank you so much for enjoying, and commenting. I will visit.you soon.
Date: 3/17/2022 2:06:00 AM
Well deserved top win! Beautifully done
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Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 4/28/2022 8:42:00 PM
Thank you for reading, appreciate your support. Just realized I won. Thanks again
Date: 3/10/2022 3:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest! A very enjoyable fun write! :)Paulette
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Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 4/28/2022 8:43:00 PM
Paulette, sorry late Thank you for reading, and kind comment. Just realized I won.
Date: 3/8/2022 9:19:00 AM
Congratulations on this win. So cute/fun/creative. Enjoy your win and day with blessings..........
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Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 4/28/2022 8:45:00 PM
Paula thank you for thinking this was cute etc. I am enjoying my win now as I didn't realize I had won. Thanks again so much!
Date: 3/6/2022 1:19:00 AM
Barbara, thanks for participating in my contest and congratulations for your placement. Best Mohan
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Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 4/28/2022 8:49:00 PM
How can I express my embarrassment? I didn't realize you had given me this wonderful placement. I just got back on PS and what a fantastic surprise. I am so, so thrilled. Motivating me to get back to writing. Stay well and safe.
Date: 3/5/2022 10:37:00 AM
Clever and well done! Good luck in the contest! Aloha!
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Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 4/28/2022 8:51:00 PM
Thanks for the support. I just read the comments and was so surprised to receive encouragement. Thank you. Stay safe.

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