Premiere Contest WinnerNaughty Yet Innocent

NAUGHTY YET INNOCENT

She’s young and oh so innocent,
naughty at times can be.
Depending on the time of day,
but nights … especially. 

Daytime she likes to play around,
In one place never stay.
Makes you wonder where she’s going,
but only time … will say.

When crawling towards you on her knees,
she takes your breath away.
You sweep her up into your arms,
her presence … makes your day.

Nighttime she’s unpredictable,
quite demanding can be.
Desires and needs unsatiable 
both dead tired … around three.

She gets naughty when bottle wants,
screams, and loud, known to get.
Innocent behavior, because,
she’s just two … don’t forget!


March 5, 2022 Rhyme
Contest sponsor: Mohan Chutani
NAUGHTY YET INNOCENT
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Grieves Avatar
August 31, 2023 at 10:50 PM
This is great!
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 12:25 PM
Wow! Hello, I'm glad you found my site, will visit you now that we have met. Thanks again
Gasun Avatar
August 5, 2022 at 1:41 AM
Wow! I love this a lot. So cute, delightful and sweet. I'm glad i came here again and found this outstanding poem of yours my dear friend Barbara. Sorry for the late read. Big Congratulations on your well-deserved trophy win my dear friend! Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always and your writings always..
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 1:13 AM
Len, how kind of you to be so specific in your comments, means a lot. I too am so late in so many things. Thanks for reconnecting, I will do the same.
Goff Avatar
June 29, 2022 at 8:14 PM
I bottle-fed my girls at nite when they were babies, in their 30's now, best time of my life! Good poem Barbara!
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 1:11 AM
James, When children are young, I agree, are the best years . Thanks for visiting. Come again.
Leiser Avatar
May 8, 2022 at 3:04 PM
This is both fun and hilarious at the same time! Love the “reveal” at the end…a well deserved trophy win! :)
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
August 7, 2022 at 1:10 AM
Laura, thank you so much for enjoying, and commenting. I will visit.you soon.
Seeker Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 2:06 AM
Well deserved top win! Beautifully done
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
April 28, 2022 at 8:42 PM
Thank you for reading, appreciate your support. Just realized I won. Thanks again
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March 10, 2022 at 3:06 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest! A very enjoyable fun write! :)Paulette
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
April 28, 2022 at 8:43 PM
Paulette, sorry late Thank you for reading, and kind comment. Just realized I won.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 8, 2022 at 9:19 AM
Congratulations on this win. So cute/fun/creative. Enjoy your win and day with blessings..........
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
April 28, 2022 at 8:45 PM
Paula thank you for thinking this was cute etc. I am enjoying my win now as I didn't realize I had won. Thanks again so much!
Chutani Avatar
March 6, 2022 at 1:19 AM
Barbara, thanks for participating in my contest and congratulations for your placement. Best Mohan
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
April 28, 2022 at 8:49 PM
How can I express my embarrassment? I didn't realize you had given me this wonderful placement. I just got back on PS and what a fantastic surprise. I am so, so thrilled. Motivating me to get back to writing. Stay well and safe.
Leffanta Avatar
March 5, 2022 at 10:37 AM
Clever and well done! Good luck in the contest! Aloha!
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
April 28, 2022 at 8:51 PM
Thanks for the support. I just read the comments and was so surprised to receive encouragement. Thank you. Stay safe.
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