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Crumbling Rhyme
Created by Constance La France, an eight line, rhyming poem that follows this pattern;
line 1- indent 14 spaces -  4 syllables - A
line 2- indent   8 spaces -  8 syllables-  B 
line 3- indent   6 spaces - 10 syllables- A 
line 4- indent   8 spaces-    6 syllables- B
line 5- indent   2 spaces-  12 syllables- C
line 6- indent   2 spaces - 12 syllables- C
line 7- indent   4 spaces-    8 syllables- C
line 8-indent    2 spaces-  12 syllables- A

Her mother fussed over every little detail. And always finding something to adjust, she'd scold, to no avail. Her daughter wasn't as sexy as mom wanted, she seemed somewhat scared, as though the stage was haunted. But her sponsor smiled undaunted, beauty contests flaunt naughty yet innocent lust. (Crumbling Rhyme) 02/25/2022 Naughty yet innocent Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mohan Chutani

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Date: 2/25/2022 12:02:00 PM
Emile, you have done an outstanding job with this form for this "naughty yet innocent" contest. Best of luck.
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Date: 2/25/2022 12:14:00 PM
Thanks, Milt, I appreciate it, my friend, Emile.

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