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naughty wisdom

she came out of the sea in a transparent bikini i sat up stunned like the guy from new guinea. engrossed at her raw taste of invitation, i fell for her temptation. she took me to her home, and we had lots of fun with her, i was able to enjoy my life just as i was about taking my leave, i saw an old ugly rickety lady staring at me and when i asked who she was, she replied: "that is foolishness my old trash disposer" since then, i vowed to follow wisdom, since she is greater than foolishness.

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Date: 1/9/2016 8:01:00 AM
Hi LL! I came back to this one since last time I read it but did not leave a comment. Beauty was made to be appreciated, but it would be foolish to let it draw us into temptation that goes beyond acceptable limits. After all, not all that glitters is gold! // paul
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Date: 1/10/2016 9:19:00 AM
hmmm ...ntanks dear
Date: 1/8/2016 10:25:00 AM
Wisdom is better than silver and gold...nice write....
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Date: 1/8/2016 12:05:00 PM
tanks dear
Date: 1/7/2016 4:25:00 PM
Beautiful write my friend, wise words , glad I stopped by to read it , hugs / / :) dalia
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Date: 1/7/2016 5:46:00 PM
tanks alot
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Date: 1/7/2016 4:39:00 PM
tanks alot
Date: 1/7/2016 8:26:00 AM
A wise decision my friend! Welcome to our poetic family, hope you will stay with us for a long time and be happy at the same time. A very refined verse with profound overtones! A seven!
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Date: 1/7/2016 10:13:00 AM
tanks alot .......i hope to learn more from the poetic family too.
Date: 1/7/2016 7:39:00 AM
I enjoyed the humor. I hope to read more.
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Date: 1/7/2016 10:15:00 AM
tanks john.....sure u will
Date: 1/7/2016 6:57:00 AM
Like poetry took us to her home ...Congrat.Best wishes.
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Date: 1/7/2016 10:16:00 AM
tanks dear
Date: 1/5/2016 8:17:00 PM
L Legend, nice form and format. :):);) Well done. SKAT
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Date: 1/6/2016 10:06:00 AM
tanks alot Skat
Date: 1/5/2016 7:07:00 PM
now you got me picturing some scenes....nice write pal
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Date: 1/6/2016 10:07:00 AM
tanks bro