Naughty Wisdom

she came out of the sea in a transparent bikini i sat up stunned like the guy from new guinea. engrossed at her raw taste of invitation, i fell for her temptation. she took me to her home, and we had lots of fun with her, i was able to enjoy my life just as i was about taking my leave, i saw an old ugly rickety lady staring at me and when i asked who she was, she replied: "that is foolishness my old trash disposer" since then, i vowed to follow wisdom, since she is greater than foolishness.
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Callus Avatar
January 9, 2016 at 8:01 AM
Hi LL! I came back to this one since last time I read it but did not leave a comment. Beauty was made to be appreciated, but it would be foolish to let it draw us into temptation that goes beyond acceptable limits. After all, not all that glitters is gold! // paul
Legend Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 9:19 AM
hmmm ...ntanks dear
May Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 10:25 AM
Wisdom is better than silver and gold...nice write....
Legend Avatar
January 8, 2016 at 12:05 PM
tanks dear
Shahein Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 4:25 PM
Beautiful write my friend, wise words , glad I stopped by to read it , hugs / / :) dalia
Legend Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 5:46 PM
tanks alot
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January 7, 2016 at 4:39 PM
tanks alot
Trifiatis Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 8:26 AM
A wise decision my friend! Welcome to our poetic family, hope you will stay with us for a long time and be happy at the same time. A very refined verse with profound overtones! A seven!
Legend Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 10:13 AM
tanks alot .......i hope to learn more from the poetic family too.
Beam Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 7:39 AM
I enjoyed the humor. I hope to read more.
Legend Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 10:15 AM
tanks john.....sure u will
Bocsa Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 6:57 AM
Like poetry took us to her home ...Congrat.Best wishes.
Legend Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 10:16 AM
tanks dear
A  Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 8:17 PM
L Legend, nice form and format. :):);) Well done. SKAT
Legend Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 10:06 AM
tanks alot Skat
Sage Avatar
January 5, 2016 at 7:07 PM
now you got me picturing some scenes....nice write pal
Legend Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 10:07 AM
tanks bro
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