Jenish Somadas Poet Senryu

Naughty Winter

again I barred her
from peeping in my blanket -
winter is naughty





Won fourth place in Writing Challenge, December- Winter Haiku Or Senryu - Poetry Contest sponsored by Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

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James Inman December 28, 2019 at 10:47 AM Very clever. Jenish Somadas December 28, 2019 at 10:29 PM Thank you James..

Eve Roper December 26, 2019 at 7:26 PM Janish, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve Jenish Somadas December 26, 2019 at 10:36 PM Thank you Eve..

Constance La France December 26, 2019 at 5:55 PM Jenish, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with your wonderful senryu ~ Jenish Somadas December 26, 2019 at 10:36 PM Thank you Dear Heart.. Thanks for the - ...

Anne-Lise Andresen December 25, 2019 at 2:21 PM - Congratulations, with your winning poem Jenish - Marry Christmas and Happy New Year :) - Greetings from // Anne-Lise :) Jenish Somadas December 25, 2019 at 10:24 PM Thank you Anne.. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year..

L. J. Carber December 25, 2019 at 10:24 AM Very cute, and apropos the season [oh how I feel the cold I once loved so, as I get old!] Congrats, Jenish Jenish Somadas December 25, 2019 at 10:23 PM Thank you..

Gershon Wolf December 17, 2019 at 9:06 AM Ha, ha! Love this one, Jenish! Censorship (of a sort) in the bedroom, even from a poet! What is this world coming to?! LOL. G.L. in the contest. This should do quite well, methinks! :) gw Jenish Somadas December 17, 2019 at 9:47 AM Hahaha.. Your comment broaden my smile.. Thank you..

Vijay Pandit December 15, 2019 at 7:21 AM Very clever Jenish--nicely done! Jenish Somadas December 15, 2019 at 10:16 AM Thank you Vijay...

Demetrios Trifiatis December 15, 2019 at 6:56 AM Charming! Brought a smile ...or two dear, Jenish! Jenish Somadas December 15, 2019 at 10:15 AM Thank you Demetrios..

Na Na December 15, 2019 at 5:04 AM Nice one Jen. Blankets are good but if none are close body heat does well :)~ Jenish Somadas December 15, 2019 at 10:15 AM Lol..True

Arturo Michael December 15, 2019 at 2:17 AM No unauthorized inspections...Good idea Jenish Somadas December 15, 2019 at 10:14 AM Thank you..

Caren Krutsinger December 14, 2019 at 9:39 PM Ah, this is such a fun write! Jenish Somadas December 14, 2019 at 10:33 PM Thank you Caren..