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Naughty Winter

again I barred her from peeping in my blanket - winter is naughty Won fourth place in Writing Challenge, December- Winter Haiku Or Senryu - Poetry Contest sponsored by Dear Heart - Wiishkobi Ode

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James Inman

Date: 12/28/2019 10:47:00 AM

Very clever.

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/28/2019 10:29:00 PM

Thank you James..

Eve Roper

Date: 12/26/2019 7:26:00 PM

Janish, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/26/2019 10:36:00 PM

Thank you Eve..

Constance La France

Date: 12/26/2019 5:55:00 PM

Jenish, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with your wonderful senryu ~

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/26/2019 10:36:00 PM

Thank you Dear Heart.. Thanks for the - ...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/25/2019 2:21:00 PM

- Congratulations, with your winning poem Jenish - Marry Christmas and Happy New Year :) - Greetings from // Anne-Lise :)

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/25/2019 10:24:00 PM

Thank you Anne.. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year..

L. J. Carber

Date: 12/25/2019 10:24:00 AM

Very cute, and apropos the season [oh how I feel the cold I once loved so, as I get old!] Congrats, Jenish

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/25/2019 10:23:00 PM

Thank you..

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/17/2019 9:06:00 AM

Ha, ha! Love this one, Jenish! Censorship (of a sort) in the bedroom, even from a poet! What is this world coming to?! LOL. G.L. in the contest. This should do quite well, methinks! :) gw

Jenish Somadas
Date: 12/17/2019 9:47:00 AM

Hahaha.. Your comment broaden my smile.. Thank you..