Naughty Pudding

Order by offer
Ingredients do matter
Stuck in first trouble

Boiling some flavors
Pudding missed in sweet manner
Moulding successfully failed

Yet we feel give up
Deserve for a second chance
Re-mould done! Relieved...

Sit tight in a fridge
Naughty pudding had a plan
Mission to seduce

Tempted by its look
My husband eat for a slice
Mother-in-law scold

Naughty pudding finally win in its mission, well, one pudding unsold :p
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Anglesey Avatar
June 10, 2013 at 5:59 PM
Well, my mouth was watering for some tasty naught pudding until I read the last line... cute :)
Widjanarko Avatar
June 10, 2013 at 7:00 PM
Thank you Karen, glad to have a visit by you today :D hug, yanny
Lamoureux Avatar
May 29, 2013 at 9:31 AM
Hi Yanny Where have you been?
Widjanarko Avatar
June 10, 2013 at 6:59 PM
Hello Rick, my morning is raining today, hope that you are having a wonderful day there :D hug, yanny
Lamoureux Avatar
May 25, 2013 at 9:01 AM
Yummy poem, sweet morning treat. Good afternoon Yanny, I hope you are having a splendid day. Hugs Rick.
Widjanarko Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 7:41 PM
Hello Rick :D thank you for your comment in my facebook picture hehehehe, really pleasure to have your visit in here as well :D I do have a busy day but still splendid :D wishing you a wonderful day there Rick, hug, yanny
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
May 24, 2013 at 12:06 PM
Nice one Yanny xx
Widjanarko Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 7:39 PM
Thank you Mandy :D hehehe wishing you a lovely day :D hug, yanny
Horsman Avatar
May 23, 2013 at 4:23 PM
clever poetry Yanny, like this...
Widjanarko Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 7:38 PM
Thank you Harry glad to see your comment today :D wishing you a wonderful day :D hug, yanny
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