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Naughty Angels

Poem guns in hand we stand ready to write those poems that will spin your “heady”. Sexy adjectives describe nude nouns. Risky adverbs put dull verbs down. Smoking pistols shoot sharp rhymes at fake poets who commit word crimes. When we win we strut our stuff like hot chicks who can’t get enough. When we receive those N/A’s we pick ourselves up and laugh for days. So look out Soupsters! Here the Naughty Angels come brandishing words of innuendo from our poem guns. By: Carole O'Terry Duet Copyright: May 6, 2018 "All Rights Reserved"

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Charlie Smith

Date: 5/25/2018 11:44:00 AM

Enjoyed the humor Carole, I'll keep an eye out now...

Carole Duet
Date: 5/25/2018 10:59:00 PM

Hi Charlie! I'm so glad you enjoyed "Naughty Angels". Carole :D

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/21/2018 1:55:00 PM

Hello Carole,I like this poem it is so different.I Like I can see the naughty angel the words you choose for this poem. I can see the naughty angel as i read. have a nice day my friend.

Carole Duet
Date: 5/25/2018 11:00:00 PM

Hi Darlene! Thanks for the visit and your nice comment. Carole :D

Chuck Melugin

Date: 5/17/2018 7:57:00 AM

Carole...I love your name.....If only I could sing! Your creative concepts,color, way outside the lines of "Yawn"! My best, as you venture poetically to soaring status!

Carole Duet
Date: 5/18/2018 10:49:00 AM

Wow, Chuck! You've made my head spin...lol. Thank you so much for your comment on "Naughty Angels". :D Carole Duet

Morgen Farmer

Date: 5/15/2018 4:08:00 PM

Dangerous piece of writing, loved it.

Carole Duet
Date: 5/18/2018 10:51:00 AM

Haha...oh yeah...I'm a "dangerous" lady, Morgen. Thanks for reading and commenting on "Naughty Angels". Carole Duet :D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2018 3:30:00 PM

oh my, it's a better breed than Charlie's Angels. There are so many of us naughty Soup angels. I enjoyed your humor here, Carole.

Carole Duet
Date: 5/18/2018 10:58:00 AM

Hi, Andrea! Yes, there are a quite a few of us "Naughty Angels" but I believe you are surely a good one. I'm so pleased you liked this one. Hope it gave you a laugh. Thanks. Carole :D

Paul Callus

Date: 5/12/2018 2:00:00 PM

Such an entertaining poem, Carole...reminds me of Spaghetti Westerns...and Charlie's Angels:) Keep your smoking gun handy lady:) Regards // paul

Carole Duet
Date: 5/12/2018 3:20:00 PM

Hey Paul...you got it! It was based on Charlie's Angels. I had originally included a YouTube video with the Charlie's Angels theme song but removed it for the contest. Will put it back after the contest is over. Thanks for your comment. Carole :D

Winged Warrior

Date: 5/12/2018 9:16:00 AM

Naughty Angels carry Bazookas! lol...sometimes we could use a bazooka lol...amusing write my friend...love and light...naughty angels accepted lol...^WW^

Carole Duet
Date: 5/12/2018 3:16:00 PM

Bazookas indeed! lol Thanks for your amusing comment, ^WW^. Carole :D

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/11/2018 3:02:00 PM

I see you are armed and dangerous. Great piece!

Carole Duet
Date: 5/11/2018 9:42:00 PM

Not really...lol Thanks for reading, Richard. Carole :D

Maria Williams

Date: 5/10/2018 7:09:00 AM

Oh those last four lines had me laughing, I can just imagine you brandishing your poem gun Carole. I absolutely loved your creative write, a definite fave from me....Maria xxx

Carole Duet
Date: 5/10/2018 2:49:00 PM

Hey partner! From one "naughty angel" to another: Thanks. :D Carole

Charles Messina

Date: 5/10/2018 6:49:00 AM

My grin has gotten wider with each line I've read. Sure, now you tell me you're a naughty angel...(lol) Well done Carole...Hugs // Charlie xx

Carole Duet
Date: 5/10/2018 2:47:00 PM

"Good morning, Charlie!" "We" love to make men "grin". What is our next "kick ass" assignment? ;D Carole

Joe Dimino

Date: 5/8/2018 11:55:00 PM

Naughty Angels march on! Well done.

Carole Duet
Date: 5/8/2018 11:58:00 PM

Oh yeah! Onward and upward1 Thanks, Joe. Carole Duet :D

Pashang Salehi

Date: 5/7/2018 9:29:00 PM

Nicely done Naughty Angel

Carole Duet
Date: 5/8/2018 11:57:00 PM

Well thank you, Pashang! Carole ;D

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/6/2018 1:53:00 PM

Thanks for the grin, Carole. Nice to see you writing again.

Carole Duet
Date: 5/6/2018 5:21:00 PM

I'm so happy I could bring a "grin" to your handsome face, Danny. Thank you for reading. Carole :D

Jan Allison

Date: 5/6/2018 10:38:00 AM

Lol Carole, I love using innuendo and am a little bit naughty at times lol , got lots and lots and lots of n/a's but can't abide cheaters . Love that final stanza:-) hugs Jan xx

Carole Duet
Date: 5/6/2018 5:19:00 PM

Hey, Jan! Would you believe I was picturing you and Andrea and I as those "naughty angels"! Honestly, you got "it", girl!! lol Carole :D

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/6/2018 9:26:00 AM

A fun poem, Carole.

Carole Duet
Date: 5/6/2018 5:11:00 PM

Thanks, Line. Yes, writing this one was really "fun". Carole :D

Arturo Michael

Date: 5/6/2018 8:47:00 AM

Very creative my friend...I like it...

Carole Duet
Date: 5/6/2018 5:11:00 PM

Thanks, Arturo. "Creativity" is the name of the game. Carole :D