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Addie Skating & Ice Skating While Fishing / Catching Fish on Skates -  YouTube

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*Image of Fishing, Skating on Ice by YuTu. Naturing Winter A rising star warms the cooling mist, The shrill of a hawk apexes a crown, A bevy of cooing plumages a winter, A sun entertains a tarry of sparkling, Icicles and a preserved lake shining, Ice skating, ice fishing, acts of esse. 2023 January 10

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Date: 1/10/2023 4:49:00 PM
William, this is lovely writing. Such a fun and interesting read! The metaphors you use are so exquisitely crafted.
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Hilo Poet
Date: 1/10/2023 5:35:00 PM
Blessings, Lasaad, you truly define your heritage remarkably my friend. Thank you and Aloha William
Date: 1/10/2023 12:59:00 PM
Very nice Hilo :)
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Date: 1/10/2023 1:57:00 PM
Heidi, thanks for your thought-filled share, my friend, Aloha William

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