William Kelii Kekaula Poet Free verse

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Naturing Winter

*Image of Fishing, Skating on Ice by YuTu.

Naturing Winter

A rising star warms the cooling mist,
The shrill of a hawk apexes a crown,
A bevy of cooing plumages a winter,
A sun entertains a tarry of sparkling,
Icicles and a preserved lake shining,
Ice skating, ice fishing, acts of esse.

2023 January 10

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Sotto Poet January 10, 2023 at 4:49 PM William, this is lovely writing. Such a fun and interesting read! The metaphors you use are so exquisitely crafted. William Kelii Kekaula January 10, 2023 at 5:35 PM Blessings, Lasaad, you truly define your heritage remarkably my friend. Thank you and Aloha William

Heidi Sands January 10, 2023 at 12:59 PM Very nice Hilo :) William Kelii Kekaula January 10, 2023 at 1:57 PM Heidi, thanks for your thought-filled share, my friend, Aloha William