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Nature's Wrath

Tornadoes revolving spinning in circles helter skelter Flying through the air forceful gale trapeze artist Whirlwind whips rotating spiral tumbleweeds roll Scattered debris broken pieces nature's images

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/14/2011 11:19:00 AM

your title change should fix itself automatically HUGS

Joshua Lacey

Date: 7/20/2011 4:26:00 PM

I would hate to imagine "flying through the air", descriptive poem :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/7/2011 7:17:00 AM

Just had to stop by today and thank you for your kind comments on my poetry Phyllis. I will be back soon to read more of your poetry. Love, Carol

James Foulk

Date: 5/28/2011 8:58:00 AM

a great piece you wrote, nicely written to decribe the Tornadoes. and what it would be like. thank you for commenting on Dear Sister, she has not seen it yet, i tryed calling her but no answer, but will send her a copy of it.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/26/2011 9:43:00 AM

Good afternoon Phyllis,... Nature is the one wrath i fear... she is like us.... beauty from the outside... and who know's what she stores within... Her wrath is the worst ravage of all... Gread haikus,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/25/2011 10:10:00 PM

I enjoyed all these images. Helter skelter so fit that first one! Isn't it tragic all that is happening lately with tornados?

Stephan McBride

Date: 5/23/2011 6:58:00 PM

amazing work ,

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/23/2011 3:32:00 PM

Thought provoking and moving write on the recent events with a fine visual by images, Phyllis