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Nature's Vision

Across the Mountains Pine trees wave their greenery Puffs of clouds wave back Inspired by Raul Moreno's Contest "Nature's Best

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/25/2012 9:24:00 PM
Very pretty picture. I absolutely love your naturistic haikus. (if naturistic is a word...hahah) Always, Laura
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Date: 6/24/2009 11:54:00 PM
Congrats on your success in Raul's contest HG.Rgds Brian
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Date: 6/24/2009 8:59:00 PM
love the visual on this creative haiku! HG! great win!!! jim
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Date: 6/24/2009 5:27:00 PM
Wonderful haiku, and a wonderful winning entry! Congratulations for your win in Raul's contest!~ Carrie
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Date: 6/24/2009 4:14:00 PM
Nice Imagery! Had to smile at this one. Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest! ~Trudy~
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Date: 6/24/2009 3:00:00 PM
HG, What a day! So proud of you and this lovely haiku. I am so happy..lets go out and celebrate! Love you always...Barbara Jean
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Date: 6/24/2009 2:40:00 PM
HG, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul
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Date: 5/24/2009 5:37:00 PM
Nice use of imagery for a creative view. Best wishes in the contest. Enjoyed this one. Karen
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Date: 5/20/2009 9:16:00 PM
Love the image in this haiku, HG! A very nice entry for Raul's contest! (I've been away fishing for a while, but will be returning home Thursday.) You have mail. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/20/2009 1:19:00 AM
A lovely concept of nature, I liked this. Thanks for your welcome commenting on my writes, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 5/18/2009 11:38:00 PM
Beautiful work, I love it dearly, good luck in the contest.
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Date: 5/18/2009 8:01:00 AM
Excellent description of nature and it's glorious wonders! Thank you for your kind comments on my work, always appreciated.
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Date: 5/17/2009 5:55:00 PM
was a lovely picture! light & Love
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Date: 5/17/2009 5:20:00 PM
HG, this is an excellent poem. I like the flow of the words and the message. I normally write the haiku than give it a title. It's easier for me that way. Thanks for the review on my poems. Great job and God bless always. ~Joseph
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Date: 5/17/2009 9:18:00 AM
i love the way you used images waving to each other,im sure nature is waving to us to,nice indeed---charma
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Date: 5/17/2009 8:57:00 AM
Love the image of the pines waving! ~ Lovely!
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Date: 5/17/2009 6:31:00 AM
Awesome haiku! Perfect entry! Good luck - which as of late you do not seem to need at all! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/17/2009 12:22:00 AM
Thanks for supporting my contest HG...Raul
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Date: 5/16/2009 11:10:00 PM
Traveling haiku!!!! So peaceful, thanks for the experience!!!=D
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