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Nature's Vision

Across the Mountains
Pine trees wave their greenery
Puffs of clouds wave back

Inspired by Raul Moreno's Contest "Nature's Best

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Laura Breidenthal

February 25, 2012 at 9:24 PM

Very pretty picture. I absolutely love your naturistic haikus. (if naturistic is a word...hahah) Always, Laura

Brian Strand

June 24, 2009 at 11:54 PM

Congrats on your success in Raul's contest HG.Rgds Brian

James Marshall Goff

June 24, 2009 at 8:59 PM

love the visual on this creative haiku! HG! great win!!! jim

Carrie Richards

June 24, 2009 at 5:27 PM

Wonderful haiku, and a wonderful winning entry! Congratulations for your win in Raul's contest!~ Carrie

Trudy Diane Rider

June 24, 2009 at 4:14 PM

Nice Imagery! Had to smile at this one. Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest! ~Trudy~

Barbara Gorelick

June 24, 2009 at 3:00 PM

HG, What a day! So proud of you and this lovely haiku. I am so happy..lets go out and celebrate! Love you always...Barbara Jean

Raul Moreno

June 24, 2009 at 2:40 PM

HG, congrats on your success in my contest...Raul

May 24, 2009 at 5:37 PM

Nice use of imagery for a creative view. Best wishes in the contest. Enjoyed this one. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

May 20, 2009 at 9:16 PM

Love the image in this haiku, HG! A very nice entry for Raul's contest! (I've been away fishing for a while, but will be returning home Thursday.) You have mail. Love, Carolyn

Anna-Marie Docherty

May 20, 2009 at 1:19 AM

A lovely concept of nature, I liked this. Thanks for your welcome commenting on my writes, Anna-Marie.

Elizabeth Neal

May 18, 2009 at 11:38 PM

Beautiful work, I love it dearly, good luck in the contest.

Charlene Bird

May 18, 2009 at 8:01 AM

Excellent description of nature and it's glorious wonders! Thank you for your kind comments on my work, always appreciated.

Debbie Guzzi

May 17, 2009 at 5:55 PM

was a lovely picture! light & Love

Joseph Spence Sr

May 17, 2009 at 5:20 PM

HG, this is an excellent poem. I like the flow of the words and the message. I normally write the haiku than give it a title. It's easier for me that way. Thanks for the review on my poems. Great job and God bless always. ~Joseph