Nature's Valentine

Under a large tree Two flowers bloom at same time Holding others leaves The tree then sees them Provides loving shade for them Keeping them real safe For the light’s strength Can have great power Doesn’t the sun get love?
Russell Sivey Entrant into PD's "(double) Valentine Haiku & 1 questionku" contest 1/31/2013
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Liwayway Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 7:57 AM
Awesome poem friend Russell :) Congratulations on your win. Good day always! Hgs, Maria
Lamoureux Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 7:59 AM
I like the natural twist, much more in keeping with Haiku
Veetil Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 2:29 AM
congratulations on this great write...
Gasun Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 11:18 PM
Congratulations my dear friend Russell for your very lovely write and fantastic win! I enjoyed reading your great Valentines poem! love/hugs, Leonora
Roberts Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 11:10 PM
many congrats Russell on your win in the contest with this great set of haikus
Gildersleeve Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 5:12 PM
Russell congrats on your awesome win. Connie
Haick Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 3:35 PM
Congratulations on your very fine win, Russell!
A   Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 1:55 PM
HELLO RUSSELL, thank you for the support, and fun loving haiku + questionku... Congrats, with all my heart :-) LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
February 2, 2013 at 1:07 PM
what an interesting way to do PD's nature contest. VERY nice.
Veetil Avatar
February 1, 2013 at 6:58 PM
enjoyed reading, good luck in the contest.
Horsman Avatar
February 1, 2013 at 5:19 AM
love these Russell goodluck...
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