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Nature's Valentine

Under a large tree Two flowers bloom at same time Holding others leaves The tree then sees them Provides loving shade for them Keeping them real safe For the light’s strength Can have great power Doesn’t the sun get love?
Russell Sivey Entrant into PD's "(double) Valentine Haiku & 1 questionku" contest 1/31/2013

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Date: 2/19/2013 7:57:00 AM
Awesome poem friend Russell :) Congratulations on your win. Good day always! Hgs, Maria
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Date: 2/17/2013 7:59:00 AM
I like the natural twist, much more in keeping with Haiku
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Date: 2/17/2013 2:29:00 AM
congratulations on this great write...
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Date: 2/16/2013 11:18:00 PM
Congratulations my dear friend Russell for your very lovely write and fantastic win! I enjoyed reading your great Valentines poem! love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 2/16/2013 11:10:00 PM
many congrats Russell on your win in the contest with this great set of haikus
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Date: 2/16/2013 5:12:00 PM
Russell congrats on your awesome win. Connie
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Date: 2/16/2013 3:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your very fine win, Russell!
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Date: 2/16/2013 1:55:00 PM
HELLO RUSSELL, thank you for the support, and fun loving haiku + questionku... Congrats, with all my heart :-) LINDA
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Date: 2/2/2013 1:07:00 PM
what an interesting way to do PD's nature contest. VERY nice.
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Date: 2/1/2013 6:58:00 PM
enjoyed reading, good luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/1/2013 5:19:00 AM
love these Russell goodluck...
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