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Natures Valentine

Natures kiss sweet as
pure nectar from honey bees
With love willows bow.


P.S Loving :) Val

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Andrea Dietrich

January 16, 2012 at 5:12 PM

cute, Valerie. Belated congrats to you.

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 16, 2012 at 1:55 PM

A belated congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Valentine HAIKU" contest Valerie. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick

January 13, 2012 at 1:54 PM

Congratulations on a very fine win, Valerie! Love, Annalise

Valerie Sherman

January 13, 2012 at 2:06 PM

Thanks Annalise

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

January 13, 2012 at 2:09 AM

Congratulations on your win Valerie x

Valerie Sherman

January 13, 2012 at 8:20 AM

Thanks Mandy I appreciate it

Poet Destroyer A

January 12, 2012 at 9:34 PM

Valerie... Congratulation, ;-) in my contest. Thank you for charming up nature. Have a good night,..always,..p.d.

Valerie Sherman

January 13, 2012 at 8:20 AM

Thanks for this enjoyable contest...

Sarah Mullan

January 12, 2012 at 3:16 AM

This is so sweet and natural, really like this :)Love, Sarah.

Valerie Sherman

January 12, 2012 at 8:34 AM

Thanks Sarah

Robert Pettit

January 8, 2012 at 8:33 PM

Haiku has to be the most commonly submitted form of poem on this site. I thought I saw them all until I saw yours. This is about as sweetly descriptive as anyone can get with only seventeen syllables. I see you have nineteen here. Get rid of "the" in the second line and "do" in the third line, and you are under the wire without losing anything in the descriptiveness department.

Valerie Sherman

January 8, 2012 at 8:40 PM

Thank you Robert..that is a fine looking pet you have there..