Natures Valentine

Natures kiss sweet as
pure nectar from honey bees
With love willows bow.


P.S Loving :) Val

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 1/16/2012 5:12:00 PM
cute, Valerie. Belated congrats to you.
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Date: 1/16/2012 1:55:00 PM
A belated congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Valentine HAIKU" contest Valerie. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/13/2012 1:54:00 PM
Congratulations on a very fine win, Valerie! Love, Annalise
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Valerie Sherman
Date: 1/13/2012 2:06:00 PM
Thanks Annalise
Date: 1/13/2012 2:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Valerie x
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Valerie Sherman
Date: 1/13/2012 8:20:00 AM
Thanks Mandy I appreciate it
Date: 1/12/2012 9:34:00 PM
Valerie... Congratulation, ;-) in my contest. Thank you for charming up nature. Have a good night,..always,..p.d.
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Valerie Sherman
Date: 1/13/2012 8:20:00 AM
Thanks for this enjoyable contest...
Date: 1/12/2012 3:16:00 AM
This is so sweet and natural, really like this :)Love, Sarah.
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Valerie Sherman
Date: 1/12/2012 8:34:00 AM
Thanks Sarah
Date: 1/8/2012 8:33:00 PM
Haiku has to be the most commonly submitted form of poem on this site. I thought I saw them all until I saw yours. This is about as sweetly descriptive as anyone can get with only seventeen syllables. I see you have nineteen here. Get rid of "the" in the second line and "do" in the third line, and you are under the wire without losing anything in the descriptiveness department.
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Valerie Sherman
Date: 1/8/2012 8:40:00 PM
Thank you Robert..that is a fine looking pet you have there..
Date: 1/5/2012 10:13:00 PM
Sweet one, Valerie! good luck in the contest.
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Valerie Sherman
Date: 1/6/2012 9:02:00 AM
Thank you Andrea
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