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Natures Umbrella

a weeping willow

    never really shedding tears

      nature's umbrella

        branches trailing to the ground

          green leaves sparkling in the wind

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Skat A

October 24, 2013 at 7:28 PM

wow, i love the imagery... makes me want to relax under the soothing shade.... love SKAT

Susan Palli

October 23, 2013 at 1:45 PM

Excellent!!! Great job.

Jancarl Campi

October 23, 2013 at 11:37 AM

i like this poem. it is a poem that warms me, although; winter is on the way.

Sharon Ruebel

October 23, 2013 at 11:39 AM

Hello Jancarl, Thank you for reading me today! I am glad it touches you....Yes, winter is almost here but all our willows are still full of leaves. We have had a very warm time of it this year....SMiles Lov, Shar

Jack Jordan

October 22, 2013 at 11:59 AM

I sent you a soup mail just now... Jack

Jack Jordan

October 21, 2013 at 8:38 PM

A beautiful tanka. Given that winter is on its way, this talks to me of summer... Jack

Sharon Ruebel

October 22, 2013 at 11:26 AM

Hello Jack, Thank you for visiting me! So sweet are your words. Our trees here are just now starting to lose their leaves. We have over 50 and they are so beautiful I felt inspired. Lov, Shar

Andrea Dietrich

October 19, 2013 at 11:12 PM

It's beautiful. And so true!!

Sharon Ruebel

October 21, 2013 at 11:48 AM

Thank you Andrea, It is always nice to see you and you leave such sweet messages. Have a wonderful week dear poet. Lov, Shar

Monterey Sirak

October 19, 2013 at 9:35 AM

Beautiful! Weeping willow is my favorite tree.

Sharon Ruebel

October 19, 2013 at 11:20 AM

Thank you Monterey, We have many here on the Ranch and one in particular caught my eye this day. They make me want to dream.............Your messages are so sweet. Thank you and have a wonderful weekend. Lov, Shar