Alexis Y. Poet Dizain

Natures Touch

As I lay in a hammock ‘neath the stars
I marvel at God’s spectacular world
In this peaceful scene I’m free of loud cars;
I saw a oak leaf as it twirled and twirled
Then I noticed puffy clouds as they swirled

Next the restless wind brushed my eager cheek,
Feeling whole partaking of nature’s touch
When I’m here, I forgot about my week
It’s a serene space that I love so much
Here I let go things that may be a crutch








10-25-2022
Contest: Dizian Poetry
Sponsor:Soto Poet
Theme: Nature

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FJ Thomas January 15, 2023 at 10:38 PM Sounds like such a lovely place. Wish I had one of these :)

Sara Kendrick November 7, 2022 at 12:35 PM Ahh!! Back with congrats. A very descriptive winning work. Sara

Joseph May November 7, 2022 at 6:11 AM Wonderful write Alexis, Congrats on your win

Christuraj Alex November 6, 2022 at 5:20 AM Seen your poem and read after a long time. Great work. Congratulations!

Beryl Edmonds November 6, 2022 at 2:51 AM A lovely peaceful write in Dizain form poetry Alexis, how wonderful to rest in a hammock beneath the stars. Congratulations on your well deserved win in Sotto’s contest… Belle

Joanna Daniel November 6, 2022 at 2:24 AM A peaceful write, Alexis, congratulations:)

Heidi Sands November 5, 2022 at 8:45 AM Congratulations for your win Alexis :)

Sotto Poet November 5, 2022 at 8:33 AM Congratulations on your wonderful context win, Alexis. You have composed such an excellent poem. Alexis Y. November 8, 2022 at 6:19 AM Hi Lasaad, You held a good contest. I appreciate my placement in you contest. Have a nice day my friend:-) Alexis

Sara Kendrick October 28, 2022 at 2:05 PM Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara

Andrea Dietrich October 26, 2022 at 1:19 PM fantastic dizain!!

Kim Rodrigues October 25, 2022 at 5:56 PM Great opening line then … oak leaf as it twirled and twirled Then I noticed puffy clouds as they swirled. Enjoyed!

Charles Messina October 25, 2022 at 12:28 PM I love laying on my hammock at night on starry nights... lovely write, Alexis :)

Rico Leffanta October 25, 2022 at 11:00 AM To feel part of the web of life is indeed relaxing! Enjoyed! Aloha!

Demetrios Trifiatis October 25, 2022 at 8:28 AM A stunning Dizain, my dearest, Alexis . The imagery is fantastic and the wording inspiring . Blessings.

Victor Buhagiar October 25, 2022 at 7:11 AM A wonderful Dizain. One could almost feel the calm and comfort in your verses.

Vijay Pandit October 25, 2022 at 5:56 AM Much soothing comfort you convey, Alexis, in realm of nature.

Deb M October 25, 2022 at 4:35 AM Hey Alexis….love this feel good poem of nature and peacefulness! Debx

Anne-Lise Andresen October 25, 2022 at 2:39 AM - Alexis, a perfect place to admire the stars ... I love to look at them ... fascinating ... the universe ... an infinity of stars and planets ... a great poem :) - hugs

Valsa George October 25, 2022 at 2:36 AM Enjoyed your relaxing and lying in peaceful mood on the hammock cradled by the wind under the star spangled sky....! Beautiful Dizain, Alexis. All the Best in the contest

Gary Radice October 25, 2022 at 2:07 AM Space to breathe, think, feel and relax in your time out from the world's noise. A lovely poem. Cheers - Gary