Natures Touch

As I lay in a hammock ‘neath the stars
I marvel at God’s spectacular world
In this peaceful scene I’m free of loud cars;
I saw a oak leaf as it twirled and twirled
Then I noticed puffy clouds as they swirled

Next the restless wind brushed my eager cheek,
Feeling whole partaking of nature’s touch
When I’m here, I forgot about my week
It’s a serene space that I love so much
Here I let go things that may be a crutch








10-25-2022
Contest: Dizian Poetry
Sponsor:Soto Poet
Theme: Nature

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 1/15/2023 10:38:00 PM
Sounds like such a lovely place. Wish I had one of these :)
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Date: 11/7/2022 12:35:00 PM
Ahh!! Back with congrats. A very descriptive winning work. Sara
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Date: 11/7/2022 6:11:00 AM
Wonderful write Alexis, Congrats on your win
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Date: 11/6/2022 5:20:00 AM
Seen your poem and read after a long time. Great work. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/6/2022 2:51:00 AM
A lovely peaceful write in Dizain form poetry Alexis, how wonderful to rest in a hammock beneath the stars. Congratulations on your well deserved win in Sotto’s contest… Belle
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Date: 11/6/2022 2:24:00 AM
A peaceful write, Alexis, congratulations:)
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Date: 11/5/2022 8:45:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Alexis :)
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Date: 11/5/2022 8:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful context win, Alexis. You have composed such an excellent poem.
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Date: 11/8/2022 6:19:00 AM
Hi Lasaad, You held a good contest. I appreciate my placement in you contest. Have a nice day my friend:-) Alexis
Date: 10/28/2022 2:05:00 PM
Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara
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Date: 10/26/2022 1:19:00 PM
fantastic dizain!!
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Date: 10/25/2022 5:56:00 PM
Great opening line then … oak leaf as it twirled and twirled Then I noticed puffy clouds as they swirled. Enjoyed!
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Date: 10/25/2022 12:28:00 PM
I love laying on my hammock at night on starry nights... lovely write, Alexis :)
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Date: 10/25/2022 11:00:00 AM
To feel part of the web of life is indeed relaxing! Enjoyed! Aloha!
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Date: 10/25/2022 8:28:00 AM
A stunning Dizain, my dearest, Alexis . The imagery is fantastic and the wording inspiring . Blessings.
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Date: 10/25/2022 7:11:00 AM
A wonderful Dizain. One could almost feel the calm and comfort in your verses.
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Date: 10/25/2022 5:56:00 AM
Much soothing comfort you convey, Alexis, in realm of nature.
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Date: 10/25/2022 4:35:00 AM
Hey Alexis….love this feel good poem of nature and peacefulness! Debx
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Date: 10/25/2022 2:39:00 AM
- Alexis, a perfect place to admire the stars ... I love to look at them ... fascinating ... the universe ... an infinity of stars and planets ... a great poem :) - hugs
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Date: 10/25/2022 2:36:00 AM
Enjoyed your relaxing and lying in peaceful mood on the hammock cradled by the wind under the star spangled sky....! Beautiful Dizain, Alexis. All the Best in the contest
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Date: 10/25/2022 2:07:00 AM
Space to breathe, think, feel and relax in your time out from the world's noise. A lovely poem. Cheers - Gary
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