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Nature's Tonic

The breeze, dank with autumnal chill Sighs through the lonesome woodland trail Yet whispers of sweet promise Waft gently through the bracing air 27.10.20 An excerpt from my poem 'Romantic encounters with nature' Liberum Divisa 2 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Gregory Barden

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Date: 11/1/2020 3:51:00 AM
Those whispers of sweet promise can indeed take the edge off of an autumn chill. I imagine the sound of a brook or the chattering of birds. Love this poetic snapshot of a hike in the woods, Wendy, and the title was perfect.
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Date: 10/27/2020 2:55:00 PM
Hello Wendy, in four short lines you have revealed a moment. Enjoyed!
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Wendy Watson
Date: 10/27/2020 3:15:00 PM
I really appreciate your encouragement, Belden. Thank you.

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