Thompson Emate Poet Rhyme

Nature's Tempest - Collab

Wearied by our crass negligence,
Troubled by our stern ploy,
We're blinded to the evidence,
Nonchalant to her joy.

Consumed by our intelligence,
We obtain and destroy.
Disrupting nature's elements,
Anguish our hands employ.

   Joanna Daniel's Part

Plundered by greed's malevolence,
Her patterns, we annoy,
Though nature in her elegance,
Blessings, let us enjoy.

Ashamed by our impenitence,
When will we change deploy?
Let's not exploit benevolence,
Not use her like our toy


March 29, 2023.
Collaborate With Me Poetry Contest,
Joanna Daniel.
Rhyme Scheme: abab
Syllable Count: 8686

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Alexis Y. March 30, 2023 at 1:02 PM Hi Thompson, Congratulations on your win. Well done. Have a great day:-) Alexis Thompson Emate March 30, 2023 at 1:20 PM Thank you, Alexis. I'm honoured.

Daniel Turner March 30, 2023 at 8:46 AM Congratulations on your winning write, Thompson. This is excellent! Thompson Emate March 30, 2023 at 1:19 PM Thank you, Daniel. It's an honour.

Linda Alice Fowler March 30, 2023 at 7:42 AM Congratulations on your win Thompson! :) Thompson Emate March 30, 2023 at 1:18 PM Thank you, Linda. I'm honoured.

Joanna Daniel March 30, 2023 at 6:25 AM Tough to collaborate with, but I enjoyed the challenge, congratulations, Emate:) great message:) Thompson Emate March 30, 2023 at 1:18 PM Thank you, Joanna. It's an honour.