Nature's Tears

nature's emotions
cascade over mountain's edge
her stifled cries heard

april 30, 2020

Waterfalls Poetry Contest
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Merryman Avatar
July 2, 2021 at 9:06 PM
Sandra, congrats on your win with this creative haiku! Blessings, Kim M
Kauffman Avatar
July 1, 2021 at 9:07 AM
Congratulations Sandra! Amazing image of the waterfall as Mother Nature's tears. Hope you are well. Hugs and blessings!
Allison Avatar
July 1, 2021 at 1:30 AM
and mother nature continues to cry... many congrats on your win Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
Alex Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 9:59 PM
Wonderful. Congratulations!
Gauthier Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 6:22 PM
Beautiful, Sandra ~
Zahid Avatar
May 11, 2020 at 11:27 AM
Yeah, nature has been crying since long. Nicely written.
Watt Avatar
May 7, 2020 at 12:05 AM
Lovely imagery of nature crying by waterfall. A pleasure to read, Sandra. Hugs ~ John
Dietrich Avatar
May 5, 2020 at 9:35 AM
This is fantastic. Congrats on whatever placement you received!!
Mcintosh Avatar
May 5, 2020 at 6:02 AM
Wonderful poem, sweet friend. God bless you and I wish you the best for the contest. Love and prayers, Gina
Scars Avatar
May 4, 2020 at 11:05 AM
great 'ku sweet lady, never cease to amaze me, I hope you are staying healthy and happy! Be blessed :)
Ligon Avatar
May 2, 2020 at 7:33 PM
Great parallel. I love the imagery you give.
Ashley Avatar
May 1, 2020 at 9:58 PM
Emotions flow with raging beauty in your expressive haiku, Sandy. I especially love the middle line and the wild abandon with which the tears fall. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
Dietrich Avatar
May 1, 2020 at 2:39 PM
very original, Sandy!!
Pandit Avatar
May 1, 2020 at 6:49 AM
A lovely metaphoric write--filled with emotion. All the best, Sandy.
Adams Avatar
May 1, 2020 at 6:53 AM
Thank you so much Vijay! hugs
Trifiatis Avatar
May 1, 2020 at 2:36 AM
Thunderous Haiiku dearest, Sandra! Hugs xxx Good luck!
Adams Avatar
May 1, 2020 at 6:52 AM
Thank you so much Demetrios... hugs and blessings XoXo
Faulkner Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 10:42 PM
A waterfall is like a river of emotion, overflowing the arms of nature, a beautiful poem for the contest, sandra!
Adams Avatar
May 1, 2020 at 6:52 AM
Thank you so much Michelle, I wanted to think outside the box for this one :) hugs
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