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Nature's Surprise

I stroll through the woods to get out and stretch my weary legs. The scent of the newly fallen rain soothes the stress of the Covid dread. I continue down the winding path through the trees. I come to a clearing with a raging waterfall as a gasp to breathe. The sight is majestic as the water cascades down the algae filled boulders. I close my eyes and listen to the roar and embrace the cool mist as the stress of life falls from my shoulders. My eyes then focus on a vision of beauty beneath the shower near the falls. As I near the falls the flower comes alive in full bloom as the impulse of passion calls. I lightly feel her smooth petals as she appears to quiver. I lean in and taste her sweet juices that flow on my lips like that of a river. My lips slide across her brilliant pink walls as I taste her milky white juices as it sprays. I close my eyes to capture the memory of this glorious day.

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Date: 11/1/2020 7:58:00 AM
Yes indeed, nature has it's own way of easing our stresses... I like your use of rhyme in this poem combined with such stunning imagery... Nice work, Nature Boy :)
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Date: 11/1/2020 3:00:00 PM
Thank you very much the imagery brings the vision to life :)
Date: 10/29/2020 11:05:00 AM
Very sensual Gregory, lovely to see you back on the site:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/29/2020 11:15:00 AM
Thank you Dear Yes vision was so clear and pleasing to write :)
Date: 10/29/2020 10:44:00 AM
Lovely imagery and so peacefully beautiful..
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Date: 10/29/2020 10:46:00 AM
Thank you very much it was a beautiful vision I thought I'd share :)

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