Natures Revolt

Nature’s Revolt

  
It was a day of woe 
As we stared and uttered wails 
When we beheld an awesome sight
Of priceless loss
It was a universal eve
When the world was sparkling the sky
With thundering shouts of joy
To greet the arrival of a saint 
Who staked it, to be a saviour
But we were rooted out of our moods
With mortals wails taking us to the orients
Where we beheld nature untimely revolts
Against life in the Asian world
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Stone Avatar
December 21, 2024 at 1:51 PM
I think you caught the general tenor of life today. Particularly liked the line, " of priceless loss". Keep writing!
Campbell Avatar
January 10, 2025 at 6:51 AM
Happy New Year to you. Thank you for your comment.
Campbell Avatar
December 28, 2024 at 1:23 PM
Hi Kim, Thank you, this is appreciated.
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