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Nature's Reflections

Scenic scenes of peace, Projected from the surface; Of a calm...still pond.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/6/2009 8:18:00 PM
awesome write
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Date: 5/28/2009 11:18:00 AM
it made me smile,. qorgeous work
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Date: 5/28/2009 1:10:00 AM
Aweome great haiku master!
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Date: 5/27/2009 11:13:00 AM
Beautiful write -Jessica
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Date: 5/26/2009 10:14:00 PM
A great sense of serenity comes from ready this haiku, Raul. Thank you! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/26/2009 4:59:00 PM
Perfect, Raul. I have a picture of that pond on my website under waterscapes. http://Daneann.Freehost10.com Take a look and see if you agree. It's the one with pings and blues. Your Haikus are great. Keep writin. Loveingly, Dane
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Date: 5/26/2009 2:40:00 PM
Wow Raul, i want to see inside your head. It must full of awesome images just waiting to be released, James
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Date: 5/26/2009 2:21:00 PM
A very nice use of imagery! love it! keep it up boy!
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Date: 5/26/2009 1:17:00 PM
Nice use of alliteration. The serenity flows through this haiku. Thank you for sharing it for us and for your congrats. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 5/26/2009 10:35:00 AM
Ah...i wish I were there, beautiful. love, Kristin
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Date: 5/26/2009 8:05:00 AM
Mirror , mirror on the pond , Raul writes Haikus way beyond !! .... Write onnnnnn ....
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Date: 5/26/2009 7:56:00 AM
That adjective noun combination ... a linguistic flame of brilliance
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Date: 5/26/2009 7:34:00 AM
Beyond soothing. Love the stillness. Awesome. Love, Shar
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Date: 5/26/2009 7:01:00 AM
Sooooo peaceful....ummmmmm!
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Date: 5/26/2009 5:03:00 AM
The first line and third line are majestic....this tells a complete story.
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Date: 5/26/2009 4:37:00 AM
A wonderful, perfect, description. I love it. Ginny
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