Nature's Reflections

Scenic scenes of peace,
Projected from the surface;
Of a calm...still pond.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Eckiwaudah Avatar
June 6, 2009 at 8:18 PM
awesome write
Castelanos Avatar
May 28, 2009 at 11:18 AM
it made me smile,. qorgeous work
Orozco Avatar
May 28, 2009 at 1:10 AM
Aweome great haiku master!
K Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 11:13 AM
Beautiful write -Jessica
Devonshire Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 10:14 PM
A great sense of serenity comes from ready this haiku, Raul. Thank you! Love, Carolyn
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 4:59 PM
Perfect, Raul. I have a picture of that pond on my website under waterscapes. http://Daneann.Freehost10.com Take a look and see if you agree. It's the one with pings and blues. Your Haikus are great. Keep writin. Loveingly, Dane
Fraser Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 2:40 PM
Wow Raul, i want to see inside your head. It must full of awesome images just waiting to be released, James
Hensley Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 2:21 PM
A very nice use of imagery! love it! keep it up boy!
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May 26, 2009 at 1:17 PM
Nice use of alliteration. The serenity flows through this haiku. Thank you for sharing it for us and for your congrats. Keep on writing! Karen
Reynolds Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 10:35 AM
Ah...i wish I were there, beautiful. love, Kristin
Kelly Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 8:05 AM
Mirror , mirror on the pond , Raul writes Haikus way beyond !! .... Write onnnnnn ....
Shango Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 7:56 AM
That adjective noun combination ... a linguistic flame of brilliance
Winter Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 7:34 AM
Beyond soothing. Love the stillness. Awesome. Love, Shar
Richards Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 7:01 AM
Sooooo peaceful....ummmmmm!
Higgins Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 5:03 AM
The first line and third line are majestic....this tells a complete story.
Muller Avatar
May 26, 2009 at 4:37 AM
A wonderful, perfect, description. I love it. Ginny
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