Nature's Lesson For Parents

I watched a hatching baby chick
struggling to break free from its shell
that was its home for many days
but now was time to say farewell

Mom had pecked into the shell
a tiny hole to start the process
She did her part dutifully
Now the chick must do the rest

I felt sorry for the struggling chick
and could almost feel the pain
I wanted to break off the shell
thinking it would ease the strain

Then I remembered someone said
The chick must struggle on its own 
to start its heart and lungs working
for it to become fully grown

I stood and watched as a miracle
unfolded right in front of me
All by itself the chick broke out
and stood there so cute and furry

There is a lesson here for parents
who are raising a family
Be protective of your children
but do not do it overly




*I actually witnessed this event.
I wrote this after reading Evrod Samuel's
TOO MUCH LOVE CAN KILL


john beharry, Any poem/Any form - for new poets of soup, 12/1/2013
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December 11, 2013 at 9:43 AM
nice winning poem John Have a nice day..... -<-@ luv~LINDA <3
Dietrich Avatar
December 8, 2013 at 4:06 PM
I love that you watched this event and also were inspired by another author's writing with an excellent message for all. Congrats on your win.
Ligon Avatar
December 7, 2013 at 8:15 PM
Thanks for teaching me something about chicks and a life lesson that applies. Congrats, John!
Samuel Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 1:33 PM
Lovely poem......its hard to know how much love is too much..carrying a child for 9 months creates a bond that can overwhelm..a cousin had a child near ayr ago and she doesn't want anyone to have much interaction with the child so much so im afraid to even touch the child for fear I spoil it lol
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December 3, 2013 at 3:23 PM
Thank you, evrod, for your comment! Have a wonderful day!
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