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Nature's Lesson For Parents

I watched a hatching baby chick struggling to break free from its shell that was its home for many days but now was time to say farewell Mom had pecked into the shell a tiny hole to start the process She did her part dutifully Now the chick must do the rest I felt sorry for the struggling chick and could almost feel the pain I wanted to break off the shell thinking it would ease the strain Then I remembered someone said The chick must struggle on its own to start its heart and lungs working for it to become fully grown I stood and watched as a miracle unfolded right in front of me All by itself the chick broke out and stood there so cute and furry There is a lesson here for parents who are raising a family Be protective of your children but do not do it overly *I actually witnessed this event. I wrote this after reading Evrod Samuel's TOO MUCH LOVE CAN KILL john beharry, Any poem/Any form - for new poets of soup, 12/1/2013

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Date: 12/11/2013 9:43:00 AM
nice winning poem John Have a nice day..... -<-@ luv~LINDA <3
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Date: 12/8/2013 4:06:00 PM
I love that you watched this event and also were inspired by another author's writing with an excellent message for all. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/7/2013 8:15:00 PM
Thanks for teaching me something about chicks and a life lesson that applies. Congrats, John!
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Date: 11/19/2013 1:33:00 PM
Lovely poem......its hard to know how much love is too much..carrying a child for 9 months creates a bond that can overwhelm..a cousin had a child near ayr ago and she doesn't want anyone to have much interaction with the child so much so im afraid to even touch the child for fear I spoil it lol
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John Beharry
Date: 12/3/2013 3:23:00 PM
Thank you, evrod, for your comment! Have a wonderful day!

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