Natures Fruits

her curvedness excites
freshly squeezed fruits I do drip
pert to palate taste
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Deane Avatar
June 29, 2011 at 5:17 AM
Simply sensuous senryu James, nicely written...luv Shannon
Rutherford Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 4:54 AM
Awesome senryu. A side of you people will love.Anne
K. Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 12:21 PM
ooh wee-- well this sure is a sensual hottie, James! Gosh, Francine definitely got lots of hot plates on her hands...
Mehta Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 6:28 PM
Very sensuous expressions, good luck, james
Dietrich Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 4:36 PM
sounds like a smorgasborg of sensual delight!
Kendrick Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 3:35 PM
Descriptive..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work...Sara
Neels Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 12:19 PM
Oh my my, what a delectable write Mr. Romance... love it!! :) if for Francine's contest.. Good luck to you.. Hope you are okay, miss our mad chats x
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