Nature's Envy

The 
Sunshine
Stands jealous
Of your beauty
Refusing to shine
Envious of your smile
Even the moon turns away
For all the stars reflect your eyes
The ocean sings songs of your beauty
Captivated with your breathless essence
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Taylor Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 8:12 AM
Outstanding, my friend. What a write. >>>Ralph
Bruinekool Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 5:45 PM
Fantastic effort, brother. The only thing I would reconsider in your shoes is repeating the word beauty. There are other words that are two syllables that work, but that's just me. Overall, I truly enjoyed this poem as well as others of yours that I have read.
Culverhouse Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 1:07 PM
I would like to meet this beauty...Have not seen such grace and sparkle.
Mehta Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 9:15 AM
What a great images.Enjoyed it
Arteaga Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 8:46 AM
nature's envy of someone you find in natures beauty n.n
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