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Nature's Envy

The Sunshine Stands jealous Of your beauty Refusing to shine Envious of your smile Even the moon turns away For all the stars reflect your eyes The ocean sings songs of your beauty Captivated with your breathless essence

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/24/2010 8:12:00 AM
Outstanding, my friend. What a write. >>>Ralph
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Date: 6/23/2010 5:45:00 PM
Fantastic effort, brother. The only thing I would reconsider in your shoes is repeating the word beauty. There are other words that are two syllables that work, but that's just me. Overall, I truly enjoyed this poem as well as others of yours that I have read.
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Date: 6/23/2010 1:07:00 PM
I would like to meet this beauty...Have not seen such grace and sparkle.
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Date: 6/23/2010 9:15:00 AM
What a great images.Enjoyed it
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Date: 6/23/2010 8:46:00 AM
nature's envy of someone you find in natures beauty n.n
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