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Nature's Demise

Hear the subtle cries Slow death invades their terrain Black lake mirrors event

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 2/26/2010 4:29:00 AM

Dear Audrey, Magnificent Haiku I assume YOU entered Raul's Contest Good Luck YOUR New Best Friend ALWAYS...HG -- Audrey, I am making a List Of " End Line Word " POEMS and Linda-Marie, the " SweetHeart " of the Soup told me YOU have Written One I would Like to read It What is the Title and do YOU have more than One Dane is going to send to the Management of POETRYSOUP and Other POETRY Sites May I have YOUR Permission to add YOU to the List?? YOUR New Best FRIEND ALWAYS...HG

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/20/2010 5:55:00 AM

different and great work!!

Edward Ford

Date: 2/19/2010 6:24:00 PM

A sad and yet so honest truth, well written and quite thought provoking Audrey

James Fraser

Date: 2/19/2010 11:28:00 AM

Haunting Haiku Audrey, a very good piece indeed >> James

Susan Palli

Date: 2/18/2010 12:57:00 PM

vivid!

Matthew Anish

Date: 2/18/2010 11:10:00 AM

Quite a dark picture. Nice, expressive work. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Tobey Hill

Date: 2/18/2010 9:49:00 AM

wonderful work...

David Byrne

Date: 2/17/2010 7:15:00 PM

nightmareish............I love it!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/17/2010 3:53:00 PM

Lovely Haiku dear friend..Charma

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 2/17/2010 9:56:00 AM

Very well written Haiku! Audrey! Striking imagery. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comments on mine. Best wishes, Caroline.

Mac Mcgovern

Date: 2/17/2010 9:14:00 AM

Great perspective. I wish we could post pictures with the poetry to understand the poetry intent. I imagine this is a contest entry. Having said that, Your vision of the picture is incredible. A wonderful Hauki. Mac

Derrick Burton

Date: 2/17/2010 7:17:00 AM

smalled packed and powerful, enjoyed reading it today and have a great day. :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/17/2010 4:10:00 AM

Interesting Haiku. Is this one for the contest? If so should do well. Good luck. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work. Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/16/2010 7:24:00 PM

Luv this Haiku .. if for Raul's new contest ..it sure is a super winner .. these words are tremendous description of the photo.. my entry is Atmosphere.. also wrote Aura.. don't know which to enter... help? .. thankxxx for your always encouraging and witty comments so special to me.. my friend.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Marty Owens

Date: 2/16/2010 6:37:00 PM

Audrey...I love your Haiku...good luck in the contest...Marty....P.S. I didn't get your email...please try again thanks...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/16/2010 4:21:00 PM

The slow death description is compelling, Audrey. I wish there weren't so much truth in this haiku, but of course there is. Excellent writing! Love, Carolyn

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 2/16/2010 4:08:00 PM

This is a solid entry. Hi. Miss Audrey! Sorry about thge lapse in returning your e-mail, but I have been rather busy and distracted. I would like to attempt to write a melody to that or a couple others, with your indulgence. I will look them over and get some ideas together. I won't let you hear the results unless I am satisfied with the melody. I do have a standard that I expect in my music. It may take a while, but I'll give it a try. Keoghstawski@Yahoo.com.