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Nature's Decay and Rebirth

"Flowers fade and decay through wintry hours- waiting for rebirth." ~Constance La France A quiet forest, once so green, Where summer's vibrant light was seen, While passing beneath a mistiness deep, While soil matters here, keep. The crisped air cools the fragile leaf, A downhearted farewell was brief, Freed from overladen boughs, high and tall, Answering the last call. The old-aged roots hold fast and tight, To linger through the dark of night, They sense the tremble of impacted ground, Where sleeping seeds are found. Then cracks surface on winter's face, A thinning from the sun's embrace, A snail-like awakening, soft and new, As warmth heals what's gone through. A tiny shoot, a newborn green, The first small sign of what has been, A pattern has closed, a promise well kept, Life grows where essence slept.
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Goldsmith Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 10:47 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Great Picture.... Have Autumn Blessings As You Write Away.............
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 12:23 PM
Thanks, and Aloha, William.
Alex Avatar
October 28, 2025 at 7:16 PM
"Life grows where essence slept." - A very beautiful poem. Congratulations!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 12:22 PM
Thanks, and Aloha, Willism.
Andresen Avatar
October 28, 2025 at 12:02 PM
- A wonderful time when spring comes again, Hilo - Congratulations on your winning poem :) - hugs
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 12:20 PM
Thanks, and Aloha, William.
George Avatar
October 17, 2025 at 8:05 PM
On one side, there is the sign of decay, on the other, there are signs of rebirth. Decay and rebirth are repeated in endless cycles. Beautifully illustrated in this well rhyming poem and the last line is an apt conclusion. All the Best.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 17, 2025 at 10:01 PM
Said with thought-filled grace. It is a rewrite as I did toss out my original, which was unread, hence, enabling a reprieve, oops, retrieve. Aloha, my friend.
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