Nature's Comforting Arms

Written: September 02, 2023
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Golden beams caress
Nature's touch, web of cosmos~
Warm sun is my life

Glorious soft loop
It offers wordless concord~
Whispers bind and heal

Caring hands caress
Feelings sparkle beyond words~
An embrace of soul

Whispers in the wind
I patted my tangled hair~
A hug reveals where

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Paige Hind

Date: 9/7/2023 3:48:00 PM

I'm smiling for your poem! :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/3/2023 2:37:00 PM

How cute - you capture a romance between these parrots in this write Lasaad - your second stanza is very sweet. Love your them about parrot love. Blessings galore Jennifer.

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 9/3/2023 9:46:00 AM

Very nice! (feelings sparkle beyond words) is my favorite line!

Silent One

Date: 9/3/2023 8:59:00 AM

Even in short form you create so much imagery.. I really do like the flow of all four of them and how you capture a different thing in each of them.. You use of nature is excellent as always and nice choice of words... impressive!

Ink Empress

Date: 9/3/2023 2:20:00 AM

the weather seems really bad today, i wish the arms of nature would be calmer, hah seas seem rough, but this poem seems so comforting and beautiful and soul warming as always. I really love how you’ve written “web of cosmos” “ feelings sparkle beyond words” “ an embrace of soul” “ the way you’ve described arms and touch of nature is so very poetic and profound. And haiku seems so very well flowing with one too. So good and rhythm and depth of your imagery truly blew me away. Another excellent poem from your pen , you never fail to amaze me. Such a gifted poet you are

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/3/2023 12:49:00 AM

Wow, this is such a magical and gorgeous chain of haikus, I love how beautifully this flows, serenading in the most perfect rhythm and imagery. I always love reading your brilliantly articulated writes that swirl in the richness of poetic world.. Ah, the essence and grace of touch and its warmth has been so wonderfully depicted here.. Love this so much!

Speaks Volumes

Date: 9/2/2023 10:41:00 PM

You could enter your own contest with this adorable poem about the sensation of touch. I think it is the most comforting, loving and yes, sensuous of the senses. A wonderful poem.