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Natures call struck

In the cold abyss, we beseech that we may not wither in and from our purchase. Even though we do not expedite ourselves and flow in life's narrow progression. There's no certainty to existence. just when you come out of that penurious life, residing up to the dreams, unnatural nature whispers your end in an ending echo, leaving those we cherish in despair and hurt of a loss. It makes me wonder, why then Do we even try? When a creative dies, some colours of nature fade. Live on Wild!

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Date: 12/9/2023 4:43:00 PM
a thought provoking and deep read, Tonye. I appreciate the feelings of despair and the question "Why do we even try." I especially liked the last verse. When a creative dies, some colors of the world fade." That is true. Brilliant! enjoy your evening, Sara
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Tonye George
Date: 12/10/2023 5:43:00 AM
Thank you so much Sara for your comforting comment.
Date: 12/9/2023 6:59:00 AM
When one dies another is born replacing the beauty:) Deep write, Tonye. We keep trying because we have an endless supply of love. What we give, we receive:) Merry Christmas, young lady:)
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Tonye George
Date: 12/10/2023 5:42:00 AM
Yes turner another one is born replacing. Thank you.
Date: 12/9/2023 6:11:00 AM
"When a creature dies, some colors of nature fade." In a sense this is true, since each creature posseses its own unique DNA stamp. Interesting poetry Tonye
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Tonye George
Date: 12/10/2023 5:45:00 AM
Indeed Tom.We need the world full of colours, thank you so much for your support.
Date: 12/9/2023 5:03:00 AM
I could feel the angst in your words Tonye... the ending is an interesting one and tought provoking.
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Tonye George
Date: 12/10/2023 5:47:00 AM
Yes it is. I lost a colleague, a very creative one. Thank you for your support.
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Silent One
Date: 12/9/2023 5:04:00 AM
Thought provoking

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