Nature's Breath

Chilly horizons,
Nature yawns a misty dawn:
Vapors fog the trees.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Neal Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 8:06 AM
I missed this contest, I like how you describe the morning mist as nature's breath. Nice Job
Beam Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 6:35 PM
nice one thanks really enjoy dailey pictures to write about thanks again hope you continue to post contest
Sweetheart Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 3:47 PM
SOUP MAIL..luv..
Fraser Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 3:39 PM
Wonderful Haiku Raul, may i say thank you so much for all your help and comments on my poetry over the past year. I wish you well in your writing endeavours >> James
Dietrich Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 8:53 PM
well, I really like YOURS here, Raul, and thanks so much for the win. I always appreciate it so much. LUv, andrea
Scripca Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 3:39 PM
Wow, what an original Haiku here, dear Raul.I like especially the 2nd and 3rd verse. Soup Mail.
Culverhouse Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 12:57 PM
enjoyed reading today!
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April 26, 2010 at 12:30 PM
Wonderful use of imagery for a artistic view. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. Keep that pen flowing! Karen
Mason Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 12:09 PM
Great imagery here, Raul. Thanks so much for the win in your contest ... I just submitted the poem a couple of days ago !! I'm amazed and pleased!! Thanks again.
Chircop Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 5:53 AM
This is one of the reasons,i never entered contest. .How can i win with talented poets like you?: ) . .great Haiku of your posted pic. Raul,If i ever have to leave here,your haikus are surely one of the most things i would miss. .great work-Charma
Sweetheart Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 5:46 AM
And of course its a perfect portrayal of the photo u presented to us for the contest.. words of sheer delight and perfection Raul.. thankxxx for choosing "Breath of Life" as your 3rd place winner... much appreciated .. thankxxx for another creative challenge..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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