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Nature's Breath

Chilly horizons, Nature yawns a misty dawn: Vapors fog the trees.

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David Neal

Date: 4/28/2010 8:06:00 AM

I missed this contest, I like how you describe the morning mist as nature's breath. Nice Job

John Beam

Date: 4/27/2010 6:35:00 PM

nice one thanks really enjoy dailey pictures to write about thanks again hope you continue to post contest

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/27/2010 3:47:00 PM

SOUP MAIL..luv..

James Fraser

Date: 4/27/2010 3:39:00 PM

Wonderful Haiku Raul, may i say thank you so much for all your help and comments on my poetry over the past year. I wish you well in your writing endeavours >> James

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/26/2010 8:53:00 PM

well, I really like YOURS here, Raul, and thanks so much for the win. I always appreciate it so much. LUv, andrea

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 4/26/2010 3:39:00 PM

Wow, what an original Haiku here, dear Raul.I like especially the 2nd and 3rd verse. Soup Mail.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/26/2010 12:57:00 PM

enjoyed reading today!

Date: 4/26/2010 12:30:00 PM

Wonderful use of imagery for a artistic view. Thank you for sharing this poem with us. Keep that pen flowing! Karen

Sue Mason

Date: 4/26/2010 12:09:00 PM

Great imagery here, Raul. Thanks so much for the win in your contest ... I just submitted the poem a couple of days ago !! I'm amazed and pleased!! Thanks again.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/26/2010 5:53:00 AM

This is one of the reasons,i never entered contest. .How can i win with talented poets like you?: ) . .great Haiku of your posted pic. Raul,If i ever have to leave here,your haikus are surely one of the most things i would miss. .great work-Charma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/26/2010 5:46:00 AM

And of course its a perfect portrayal of the photo u presented to us for the contest.. words of sheer delight and perfection Raul.. thankxxx for choosing "Breath of Life" as your 3rd place winner... much appreciated .. thankxxx for another creative challenge..luv.. "Sweetheart"