Nature's Breath

Nature's Breath

Only a whisper
Of heated smoldering lust
Lingers like morn's mist
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
June 13, 2010 at 4:37 PM
Really like the imagery of this one! Luv, andrea
Anderson Avatar
April 27, 2010 at 8:59 AM
Hey Jeralynn, congrats on your win in the contest! Very nice....Jimmy
Freeman Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 11:33 AM
Congratulations on # 12 Jeralynn. Agape, Moses
Sweetheart Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 5:49 AM
Congrats Jeralynn on your winning poem in the Nature's Breath contest... wonderful words depicting the photo ..enjoy your special victory..luv.. Linda-Marie..
Moreno Avatar
April 26, 2010 at 3:45 AM
Jeralynn, congratulations on your success in my Nature's Breath contest...Raul
Lopez Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 7:25 PM
good job J. C. this is a great entry to the contest!!!
Flach Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 6:15 PM
Wow, that picture suddenly appears more sensual to me ... thanks!
Mckenzie Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 6:14 PM
Jeralynn~ Umm very very nicely done! I enjoyed this good luck in the contest! Laura :)
Richards Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 6:11 PM
Excellent description of the photograph...I can see it in my mind!! Great job!
A  Avatar
April 25, 2010 at 6:10 PM
ENJOYABLE, THANKS FOR THE HAIKU,,IRMA
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