Nature's Benediction

Closing of the day,
Aviary canopies;
Vespers in the woods.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Devonshire Avatar
June 4, 2009 at 9:43 PM
This lovely haiku reminds me of the beautiful canopy roads here in North Florida. Once more, I courtsey to the King! Love, Carolyn (Hope your book is coming along well, Raul!)
Fraser Avatar
May 31, 2009 at 12:36 PM
Bravo Haiku king, awesome Haiku>James
Winter Avatar
May 30, 2009 at 7:55 AM
Oh Raul, this is just exquisite. Beauty beyond compare. Such awesome work. Love, Shar
Reynolds Avatar
May 30, 2009 at 3:39 AM
This is lovely, so peaceful. love, Kristin
Richards Avatar
May 29, 2009 at 5:59 PM
You astound me ...the beauty of your haiku talent....this is excellent !!!
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May 29, 2009 at 4:28 PM
Interesting point of view in this poem. I enjoy how you use short forms so creatively. The strong last line leaves the reader with something to take away from this poem. Keep up the good writing. Karen
Ahmad Avatar
May 29, 2009 at 1:08 PM
Good one!
Golden Avatar
May 29, 2009 at 12:28 PM
This creates a gorgeous, tranquil setting. Just what I need at the end of the day! Nice haiku--as always, RUBEN! :o) Er...Raul! ;o) Donna aka Carina
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May 29, 2009 at 11:36 AM
I love that last line. That seals it up as a keeper in any collection. Well done and well thought out. I like this a lot. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem in the contest. Regards, GK
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