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Nature's Benediction

Closing of the day, Aviary canopies; Vespers in the woods.

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/4/2009 9:43:00 PM

This lovely haiku reminds me of the beautiful canopy roads here in North Florida. Once more, I courtsey to the King! Love, Carolyn (Hope your book is coming along well, Raul!)

James Fraser

Date: 5/31/2009 12:36:00 PM

Bravo Haiku king, awesome Haiku>James

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/30/2009 7:55:00 AM

Oh Raul, this is just exquisite. Beauty beyond compare. Such awesome work. Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 5/30/2009 3:39:00 AM

This is lovely, so peaceful. love, Kristin

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/29/2009 5:59:00 PM

You astound me ...the beauty of your haiku talent....this is excellent !!!

Date: 5/29/2009 4:28:00 PM

Interesting point of view in this poem. I enjoy how you use short forms so creatively. The strong last line leaves the reader with something to take away from this poem. Keep up the good writing. Karen

Syed Amaan Ahmad

Date: 5/29/2009 1:08:00 PM

Good one!

Donna Golden

Date: 5/29/2009 12:28:00 PM

This creates a gorgeous, tranquil setting. Just what I need at the end of the day! Nice haiku--as always, RUBEN! :o) Er...Raul! ;o) Donna aka Carina

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 5/29/2009 11:36:00 AM

I love that last line. That seals it up as a keeper in any collection. Well done and well thought out. I like this a lot. Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem in the contest. Regards, GK