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Nature's Beauty, Wonderful World - Collaboration With Robert Lindley

Golden soft was the light that swiftly flew, 
As whistling rain pelted majestic oaks. 
And the soaked birds began to cry for you 
As Nature silently wrapped up its cloaks. 

Thirsty for coming dawn, so bold and new. 

Silver Maples fluttered in the wind, 
Where the fast sleeping rabbits hid away 
All beautiful, we wish to never end 
With brightened colors, every joyful day. 

As Nature's beauty flowed out to transcend. 

Dappled sunlight flickers in swaying trees 
Squirrels forage for their winter food store 
Shadows dancing in warm autumnal breeze 
The beauty of nature holds me in awe 

Man must protect earth; we are its trustees 

God blesses us with four seasons each year 
Each one brings its own delightful beauty 
Gardens grow, pretty flowers soon appear 
Bringing joy to our world for all to see 

Please cherish the world that we hold so dear 

Collaboration by Robert Lindley & Jan Allison 
30th November 2014

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Constance La France December 2, 2015 at 4:45 PM Jan, you both did amazing work penning this collab, your lines are beautiful additions to Roberts, well done 7 ~ Jan Allison December 2, 2015 at 4:46 PM I was so honoured to be asked by Robert to write with him and I am delighted with the finished poem:-) hugs jan xx

Robert Lindley December 1, 2015 at 6:59 PM Sorry my friend for my late reply. Such great beauty you added to this poem! And shining spirit as well. Last verse is truly awesome ending wish! Thanks for writing with me and your great talent shared with me! Your Rock! A7 Jan Allison December 2, 2015 at 1:05 AM It truly was an honour to write with you Robert - I've been on an incredible journey since starting to write two years ago - thank you for helping me stay on the right path:-) hugs Jan xx Robert Lindley December 1, 2015 at 9:57 PM SORRY A TYPO-- SHOULD READ -- YOU ROCK!!

Lindsay Laurie December 1, 2015 at 5:47 PM G'day Jan... I do enjoy reading nature poems and Robert and your effort here is really good. Thank you both - Lindsay Jan Allison December 1, 2015 at 5:50 PM Thanks Lindsay I had great fun writing this it was an honour to be asked by Robert to collaborate with him:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus December 1, 2015 at 3:10 PM Robert is a capable 'instigator' (in a good sense). You and him have delivered an excellent collaboration. Love the message delivered here....Mother Earth must be grateful to you:) #7 Hugs // paul Jan Allison December 1, 2015 at 3:26 PM I am grateful to Robert - I was honoured to be asked to write with him:-) hugs jan xx

Bl Devnath December 1, 2015 at 10:25 AM Beautiful collaboration cultivated a beautiful picture of the earthly World. Good luck in the contest my lovely friend. Loved always,bl Jan Allison December 1, 2015 at 11:51 AM Thanks Bl:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso November 30, 2015 at 11:49 PM Wow, so beautiful you two! I am off to bed but for sure I will re-read this tomorrow over my coffee and savor the poem! Jan Allison December 1, 2015 at 1:15 AM Thanks Arthur:-) hugs jan xx

Debbie Guzzi November 30, 2015 at 7:41 PM Wonderful message nice collaberation. Light & Love Jan Allison December 1, 2015 at 1:15 AM I'm looking forward to reading yours Debbie:-) hugs jan xx

Alexis Y. November 30, 2015 at 7:15 PM Jan you and Robert have penned a good Collaboration. Great job! :-) Alexis 7 Jan Allison December 1, 2015 at 1:14 AM Thanks Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith November 30, 2015 at 5:11 PM Wonderful Collaboration Jan and Robert Jan Allison November 30, 2015 at 5:13 PM Thanks Tim it was wonderful to write with Robert I am so pleased with the finished poem:-) hugs Jan xxx

Keith Bickerstaffe November 30, 2015 at 3:47 PM What a rich collection of vivid images and exquisite phrases! '...we are its trustees,' never was a truer word spoken. BRAVO you two!! Best wishes, Keith 7 Jan Allison November 30, 2015 at 3:51 PM Thanks Keith I have never written with Robert before and it was wonderful the way the verses flowed without any amendment:-) I am so happy with the finished poem:-) hugs Jan xx Keith Bickerstaffe November 30, 2015 at 3:48 PM ...and lovely illustrations too!

Done Posting November 30, 2015 at 1:09 PM Wonderful you two!! Awesome job collaborating this. Jan Allison November 30, 2015 at 1:11 PM Thanks so much falling raindrops it was a pleasure to write with Robert:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen November 30, 2015 at 11:31 AM - This is is beautiful picture from U 2 ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison November 30, 2015 at 12:34 PM I look forward to reading it Anne Lise ... but ALL your poems are great:-) hugs jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen November 30, 2015 at 12:17 PM (Tomorrow December 1st I will post a great Christmas poem ..... I hope you will enjoy reading it, Jan :) Jan Allison November 30, 2015 at 11:34 AM Thanks Anne lise it was so lovely to write a collaboration poem again:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison November 30, 2015 at 11:12 AM It was a pleasure to collaborate with you Robert - I am delighted with the result :-) hugs Jan xxx Robert Lindley December 1, 2015 at 10:02 PM THE PLEASURE WAS TRULY MINE MY FRIEND. Your verses flowed out and painted a wonderful and beautiful picture my friend! A delight to write with you. Just sent you a pm... let me know..