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Nature's Ballad

It was the dream of night to write her message in verses of romance on nature’s ballad So, the rising morn painted passions of heart on marigold arc in vermilion and purple For that’s what Venus said love was, when moon relayed night’s song to amative dawn January 8, 2020 Threesome poetry contest by Silent One

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Angela Crabtree

Date: 11/11/2020 3:25:00 PM

Beautiful poem, Vijay. I love purple :)

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/15/2020 5:39:00 AM

I love it, "So, the rising morn painted passions of heart on marigold arc in vermilion and purple "; congratulations, well penned.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/14/2020 6:39:00 PM

Back with my congratulations, Vijay.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/14/2020 1:59:00 PM

- Congratulations so much on your winning poem :) - // Anne-Lise

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/13/2020 9:16:00 AM

I enjoyed this poem Vijay, but then again, your poem is as good as the previous one you wrote and the new one soon to be posted.. Blessings, Jennifer.

Silent One

Date: 1/12/2020 7:55:00 AM

These three great lines, however, i asked for all three lines not to overflow to a second one... that is why you placed lower than it deserved.. congrats on your placement..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/12/2020 8:35:00 AM

Thanks, SO--didn't occur to me!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/11/2020 12:59:00 PM

Nature and romance just seem to go together. I can see the paint dripping.......

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/11/2020 4:57:00 PM

Much appreciate Paula--many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/10/2020 8:04:00 PM

lovely and charming, Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/11/2020 4:56:00 PM

Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/10/2020 4:26:00 PM

Very beautiful, Vijay. I love the way you personified night and then explained how her dreams were achieved. This reads like a theatrical play in the cosmos. Excellent! Best wishes in Silent One's contest. Hugs, Carolyn

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/11/2020 4:58:00 PM

So kind of you my friend--many thanks.

Sandra Adams

Date: 1/10/2020 4:12:00 AM

Wow. Love your creativity in this one so much beauty in so few words I guess nature does write some of the most beautiful romance if we know how to read it. Well done Vijay. Best wishes in the contest :) hugs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/10/2020 7:36:00 AM

Thank you Sandy--much appreciate.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/9/2020 8:18:00 AM

Phantasmagoria of nature's hues on a romantic canvas dearest, Vijay! Superb.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/9/2020 8:36:00 AM

Thank you my friend for your vote of approval--much valued and appreciated, Demetrios.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 1/9/2020 2:59:00 AM

Nature wears a more alluring beauty when seen with the eyes of romance! Of different taste, tone and feel are the moments in time! You genuinely master your pen in every Artistic rendition, dear Vijay.. A challenging entry worthy of a great appreciation and honour! The best of luck in the contest.. deepest regards and blessings.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/9/2020 7:36:00 AM

I am delighted to read your kind remarks, Besma--always a pleasure! Many thanks for taking the time to write detailed feedback. Your opinion is much appreciated and valued. Thanks, again.

Jenish Somadas

Date: 1/9/2020 1:50:00 AM

Another wonderful poem from the Nature Poet.. Great entry in the contest and best wishes..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/9/2020 7:32:00 AM

Much appreciate Jenish--many thanks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/8/2020 9:40:00 PM

You paint such vivid images with your words. Nature is breathtaking!! "the rising morn painted passions of heart" So beautiful and romantic. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/9/2020 7:32:00 AM

Happy to read your cheerful comments my friend--much appreciate as always. Many thanks.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/8/2020 5:44:00 PM

Well written three liner Vijay, a romantic piece that you always compose well. Good luck. Tom.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/9/2020 7:31:00 AM

So very kind of you Tom to say that--much appreciate, as always--many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 1/8/2020 2:58:00 PM

Your three lines are splendid Vijay, I neve heard the word Amative. I love it.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/9/2020 7:29:00 AM

So glad to read your kind remarks my friend--much appreciate--many thanks.

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/8/2020 2:56:00 PM

I knew from the title, that I would love this one. So nice Vijay! :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/9/2020 7:28:00 AM

That is very kind of you Heidi--much appreciate, as always--many thanks.

Hello There

Date: 1/8/2020 2:27:00 PM

An eye-opener, for sure, and a heart-opener, indeed. I imagine this would even bring tears to the eyes of the goddess of Love herself. A fave for me.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/9/2020 7:27:00 AM

Such a special feedback you wrote my friend--appreciate, as always--many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.