Vijay Pandit Poet Free verse

Nature's Ballad

It was the dream of night to write her message in verses of romance on nature’s ballad 
So, the rising morn painted passions of heart on marigold arc in vermilion and purple 
For that’s what Venus said love was, when moon relayed night’s song to amative dawn
January 8, 2020
Threesome poetry contest by Silent One

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Angela Crabtree November 11, 2020 at 3:25 PM Beautiful poem, Vijay. I love purple :)

M. L. Kiser January 15, 2020 at 5:39 AM I love it, "So, the rising morn painted passions of heart on marigold arc in vermilion and purple "; congratulations, well penned.

Andrea Dietrich January 14, 2020 at 6:39 PM Back with my congratulations, Vijay.

Anne-Lise Andresen January 14, 2020 at 1:59 PM - Congratulations so much on your winning poem :) - // Anne-Lise

Jennifer Proxenos January 13, 2020 at 9:16 AM I enjoyed this poem Vijay, but then again, your poem is as good as the previous one you wrote and the new one soon to be posted.. Blessings, Jennifer.

Silent One January 12, 2020 at 7:55 AM These three great lines, however, i asked for all three lines not to overflow to a second one... that is why you placed lower than it deserved.. congrats on your placement.. Vijay Pandit January 12, 2020 at 8:35 AM Thanks, SO--didn't occur to me!

Paula Goldsmith January 11, 2020 at 12:59 PM Nature and romance just seem to go together. I can see the paint dripping....... Vijay Pandit January 11, 2020 at 4:57 PM Much appreciate Paula--many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich January 10, 2020 at 8:04 PM lovely and charming, Vijay! Vijay Pandit January 11, 2020 at 4:56 PM Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Carolyn Devonshire January 10, 2020 at 4:26 PM Very beautiful, Vijay. I love the way you personified night and then explained how her dreams were achieved. This reads like a theatrical play in the cosmos. Excellent! Best wishes in Silent One's contest. Hugs, Carolyn Vijay Pandit January 11, 2020 at 4:58 PM So kind of you my friend--many thanks.

Sandra Adams January 10, 2020 at 4:12 AM Wow. Love your creativity in this one so much beauty in so few words I guess nature does write some of the most beautiful romance if we know how to read it. Well done Vijay. Best wishes in the contest :) hugs Vijay Pandit January 10, 2020 at 7:36 AM Thank you Sandy--much appreciate.

Demetrios Trifiatis January 9, 2020 at 8:18 AM Phantasmagoria of nature's hues on a romantic canvas dearest, Vijay! Superb. Vijay Pandit January 9, 2020 at 8:36 AM Thank you my friend for your vote of approval--much valued and appreciated, Demetrios.

Besma Riabi Dziri January 9, 2020 at 2:59 AM Nature wears a more alluring beauty when seen with the eyes of romance! Of different taste, tone and feel are the moments in time! You genuinely master your pen in every Artistic rendition, dear Vijay.. A challenging entry worthy of a great appreciation and honour! The best of luck in the contest.. deepest regards and blessings. Vijay Pandit January 9, 2020 at 7:36 AM I am delighted to read your kind remarks, Besma--always a pleasure! Many thanks for taking the time to write detailed feedback. Your opinion is much appreciated and valued. Thanks, again.

Jenish Somadas January 9, 2020 at 1:50 AM Another wonderful poem from the Nature Poet.. Great entry in the contest and best wishes.. Vijay Pandit January 9, 2020 at 7:32 AM Much appreciate Jenish--many thanks.

Brandy Nicole January 8, 2020 at 9:40 PM You paint such vivid images with your words. Nature is breathtaking!! "the rising morn painted passions of heart" So beautiful and romantic. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit January 9, 2020 at 7:32 AM Happy to read your cheerful comments my friend--much appreciate as always. Many thanks.

Tom Cunningham January 8, 2020 at 5:44 PM Well written three liner Vijay, a romantic piece that you always compose well. Good luck. Tom. Vijay Pandit January 9, 2020 at 7:31 AM So very kind of you Tom to say that--much appreciate, as always--many thanks.

Mystic Rose Rose January 8, 2020 at 2:58 PM Your three lines are splendid Vijay, I neve heard the word Amative. I love it. Vijay Pandit January 9, 2020 at 7:29 AM So glad to read your kind remarks my friend--much appreciate--many thanks.

Heidi Sands January 8, 2020 at 2:56 PM I knew from the title, that I would love this one. So nice Vijay! :) Vijay Pandit January 9, 2020 at 7:28 AM That is very kind of you Heidi--much appreciate, as always--many thanks.

Hello There January 8, 2020 at 2:27 PM An eye-opener, for sure, and a heart-opener, indeed. I imagine this would even bring tears to the eyes of the goddess of Love herself. A fave for me. Vijay Pandit January 9, 2020 at 7:27 AM Such a special feedback you wrote my friend--appreciate, as always--many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.