Nature Walk


Amongst the purple
shadows in the early
light
Flocks of birds
taking ready for
flight
Sprinkles of colors
and various shades
of green
A place that remains
untouched and
unseen.

Water slowly
trickles along the
small creek
Where you find
pebbles and stones
so unique
Overhead the bird of
prey with eyes like
a hawk
Will gaze over
everything that
crawls or walks.

The water with it's
endless spring flow
A home for water
lilies and the fish
below
A haven for the
birds of prey
A home for the
foliage to decay.

Green moss gathers
around the trees
Gathering place for
moths, wasp and bees
Black ants invade
the old tree stumps
While tall crap
grass gathers in
clumps.

Black- eyed Susan
scent hangs strong
Other flowers barren
, flowers long gone
Once bright  berries
hung, now only a few
Saskatoon,
pin-cherries and
choke cherries too.

Amongst the purple
shadows in the early
light
The prairie sunset
turns to a soft
scented night
I walk along the
path by the creek
Finding the solitude
that I seek.

 9/4/12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 2:01 PM
So well constructed... Sweet couplet rhyming and flow, and gorgeous imagery! Such a lover of nature you are!! Best wishes, Keith
Duncan Avatar
September 22, 2012 at 11:08 PM
Oh I love this little story as I was walking along listening ;},,,,,,,, you have an awesome Phyllis ;}
Alvez Avatar
September 7, 2012 at 9:29 PM
Beautiful...I enjoyed walking along with you...A painting in words. Dorothy
Dietrich Avatar
September 6, 2012 at 4:10 PM
thanks for your wishes and comments today, sweet lady!!! Have a good day.
Kendrick Avatar
September 6, 2012 at 11:11 AM
Enjoyed your descriptive nature work..I could see the place in my mind..Sara
Horsman Avatar
September 6, 2012 at 5:48 AM
love this Phyllis, one can get lost in the beauty of this poem.
Lwele Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 2:49 PM
Phyllis,you make remember my youth days,when used to go for nature walk,at our church SDA.
Andresen Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 1:08 PM
This is a wonderful poem Phyllis. A golden gem - and YOU have created it. A poem you have to be proud of. Have a great Wednesday. - Oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 12:56 PM
phyl.. you leave me breathless!.. i have no words for this except this is absolutely exquisite and stunning.. winning , winning!..:) huggs!
Brown Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 11:50 AM
I am so happy to have time to read some wonderful poetry today. Glad yours was one of the pieces I was able to read Phyllis. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
Situation Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 7:00 AM
The once young poet has bloomed into the most beautiful flower. She has amazed her master with her own custom krafted style. I would that she think of this as a diploma from my school of poetry. For with this piece she has earned my highest honor. Phyliss, this is a masterpiece.
Situation Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 7:04 AM
T.S. has a very short list of favs but thi s is on it.
Sweetheart Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 5:52 AM
a stunning view of an untouched piece of Nature written so beautifully to astound the reader with fascination of colors .. an impressive view Phyl.. hope to get to SM later .. hubby helping me as he has time luv .. hands shot and eyesight waning ..oh .. and only 53 ..what else to come? luv ..
Dietrich Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 11:32 PM
wow, this is one of your best!!! Glad to be able to see this new post of yours today, my friend. Thanks so much for your welcome comments to my own poems. I can't stay here long tonight but want you to know how much I appreciate your friendship.
Parker Avatar
September 4, 2012 at 8:03 PM
Nice, descriptive verse. Your animation of nature is palpitating! The last stanza brings satisfying closure to a satiating poem! Enjoyed your nature rhapsody!
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September 4, 2012 at 3:40 PM
How are you doing now?
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September 4, 2012 at 3:40 PM
sounds beautiful!! I have lost you in the sea of the soups newbies. I also had the back surgery but now maybe i can sit a spell at the computer without so much pain.
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