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As one saunters by the bubbling brook fixated on intricate crannies and nooks  quaint voices encircle, relaying rhyme in a plethora of rhythms, perfectly timed Adonis blue butterflies flaunt their wings messages ensue as four swallows swing in between worlds, swept into a dream as one finds a path up the sunlit stream Kingfishers perched on the bared roots of a tree skewer some fish for afternoon tea an otter prepares a fresh banquet of cray wind rustles the birch to faint calls of a jay Wrens nesting in the hedgerows nibble on seed Willow sheds her woe down by the water reeds Damselflies rest upon a cast of white flowers as rolling clouds breakout in freshest shower

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Date: 4/6/2024 6:31:00 PM
Wonderful! Nice imagery. I really like the way you've used enjambment on a couple of lines. This one in particular. Kingfishers perched on the bared roots of a tree skewer some fish for afternoon tea. Wazza
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Date: 4/7/2024 6:04:00 AM
Hi, Warren, thanks very much for the read and your kind words, much appreciated, cheers.
Date: 12/10/2023 9:18:00 PM
You could moonlight as a travel writer or an advocate for walking to survive and thrive. Flow at speed that one can read with confidence in coming away refreshed. Enjoy the Christmas break. Best regards David in NZ
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Date: 12/25/2023 3:38:00 AM
Hi, David, thank you for your comment, hope you have a great Christmas, cheers.
Date: 4/27/2023 10:46:00 AM
Such a lively walk in the nature you had! Loved reading about so many creatures!
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Date: 5/26/2023 5:40:00 AM
Hi, Smita, thank you very much for your comment.
Date: 4/11/2022 1:41:00 PM
Very nice imagery, Carl, had to go google an image of a damselfly
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Date: 4/11/2022 2:01:00 PM
Hi, Jeff, been reading some of your poems, stunning work. Thank you for the read and comment.

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