Nature the Destroyer

the heavens darken a sinister milieu looms calm before the rage angry pellets thrash violent winds crave destruction there is no mercy the heavens lighten greenish hue reveals ruin obliteration March 12, 2012 Diana-Marie Bombardieri

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 4/9/2012 5:02:00 PM

Awesome addition to the contest. I really liked reading it. Always, Laura

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/23/2012 1:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Nature The Destroyer" contest Diana-Marie. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/19/2012 5:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in this contest Diana. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/16/2012 8:57:00 PM

congrats Diana-Marie on an awesome win for splendid words of great imagery luv..

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/16/2012 7:17:00 PM

You have captured the violence of a tornado and it's tragic aftermath, in these haiku. Congrats on your win, Diana-Marie! Love, Kim

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2012 10:34:00 PM

DIANA~.Congratulations ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/14/2012 12:56:00 PM

now i think mom is a sweet competition,lol.. you fire this page with explosive images, diana... well done and lots of luck!...:) huggs!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/12/2012 8:57:00 PM

i am giggling over Vie's comment below mine...what a sweetheart u have for a mum! awesome! :)

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/12/2012 8:56:00 PM

HI there Diana-Marie!..you painted masterfully a storm of all storms...wonderful haiku rally here! You have already won in my heart! Gwendolen