Diana-Marie Bombardieri Poet Haiku

Nature the Destroyer

the heavens darken
a sinister milieu looms
calm before the rage

angry pellets thrash
violent winds crave destruction
there is no mercy

the heavens lighten
greenish hue reveals ruin
obliteration


March 12, 2012
Diana-Marie Bombardieri

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Laura Breidenthal April 9, 2012 at 5:02 PM Awesome addition to the contest. I really liked reading it. Always, Laura

Carol Sunshine Brown March 23, 2012 at 1:19 PM Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Nature The Destroyer" contest Diana-Marie. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown March 19, 2012 at 5:21 AM Congratulations on your placement in this contest Diana. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 16, 2012 at 8:57 PM congrats Diana-Marie on an awesome win for splendid words of great imagery luv..

Kim Merryman March 16, 2012 at 7:17 PM You have captured the violence of a tornado and it's tragic aftermath, in these haiku. Congrats on your win, Diana-Marie! Love, Kim

Poet Destroyer A March 15, 2012 at 10:34 PM DIANA~.Congratulations ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

Nette Onclaud March 14, 2012 at 12:56 PM now i think mom is a sweet competition,lol.. you fire this page with explosive images, diana... well done and lots of luck!...:) huggs!

Gwendolen Song March 12, 2012 at 8:57 PM i am giggling over Vie's comment below mine...what a sweetheart u have for a mum! awesome! :)

Gwendolen Song March 12, 2012 at 8:56 PM HI there Diana-Marie!..you painted masterfully a storm of all storms...wonderful haiku rally here! You have already won in my heart! Gwendolen