Black Eyed Susan Poet Haiku

Nature the Destroyer

the sea rolled away
the little girl wonders if 
it went down a drain

her mother screams "Run!"
as a tsunami erupts -
sand castle trampled


3/11/12
Received 7th place in P.D's "Nature the Destroyer" contest
Susan Burch

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Carol Sunshine Brown March 23, 2012 at 1:18 PM Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Nature The Destroyer" contest Susan. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown March 19, 2012 at 5:20 AM Congratulations on your placement in this contest Susan. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 16, 2012 at 8:54 PM congrats Susan on an awesome win for these splendid words on Nother Nature's terror luv..

Kim Merryman March 16, 2012 at 7:14 PM Your wording brings out the terror of the moment. Well done. Congrats on your win, Susan! Love, Kim

Poet Destroyer A March 15, 2012 at 10:34 PM SUSAN~.Congratulations ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

Charmaine Chircop March 12, 2012 at 10:02 AM Outstanding haiku Susan-Charma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 12, 2012 at 7:58 AM powerful images in this Haiku Susan.. good luck in contest by PD.. congrats on a wonderful theme for contest and for my win for On This Side of Heaven.. about my lost baby boy.. appreciate the honor with so many excellent poets on list luv..

Poet Destroyer A March 11, 2012 at 9:22 PM Susan, yes...i will love them haiku's...thank you..pd

Ilene Bauer March 11, 2012 at 1:07 PM i love the "down a drain" line - very descriptive and emotional!

Anne-Lise Andresen March 11, 2012 at 11:15 AM Well done haiku Susan. - oxox Anne-Lise