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Nature the Destroyer

the sea rolled away
the little girl wonders if 
it went down a drain

her mother screams "Run!"
as a tsunami erupts -
sand castle trampled


3/11/12
Received 7th place in P.D's "Nature the Destroyer" contest
Susan Burch

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Date: 3/23/2012 1:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Nature The Destroyer" contest Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/19/2012 5:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in this contest Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/16/2012 8:54:00 PM
congrats Susan on an awesome win for these splendid words on Nother Nature's terror luv..
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Date: 3/16/2012 7:14:00 PM
Your wording brings out the terror of the moment. Well done. Congrats on your win, Susan! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/15/2012 10:34:00 PM
SUSAN~.Congratulations ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD
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Date: 3/12/2012 10:02:00 AM
Outstanding haiku Susan-Charma
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Date: 3/12/2012 7:58:00 AM
powerful images in this Haiku Susan.. good luck in contest by PD.. congrats on a wonderful theme for contest and for my win for On This Side of Heaven.. about my lost baby boy.. appreciate the honor with so many excellent poets on list luv..
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Date: 3/11/2012 9:22:00 PM
Susan, yes...i will love them haiku's...thank you..pd
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Date: 3/11/2012 1:07:00 PM
i love the "down a drain" line - very descriptive and emotional!
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Date: 3/11/2012 11:15:00 AM
Well done haiku Susan. - oxox Anne-Lise
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