Kim Merryman Poet Haiku

Nature the Destroyer

daytime sky goes dark
lightning strikes as thunder roars --
hail peppers the ground

ominous clouds churn
whirling dervish touches down --
total destruction


3/10/12 Kim Merryman
For PD's Nature the Destroyer Haiku Form only contest

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Charlotte Puddifoot March 23, 2012 at 3:55 PM congrats on your win in pd's contest; vivid images of a storm, I particularly like "hail peppers the ground" :)

Carol Sunshine Brown March 23, 2012 at 1:13 PM Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Nature The Destroyer" contest Kim. Love, Carol

Marty Owens March 23, 2012 at 10:18 AM Kim, Congratulations on your win in the contest...Marty

Carol Sunshine Brown March 19, 2012 at 5:14 AM Congratulations on your placement in this contest Kim. Love, Carol

Chuck Novotny March 16, 2012 at 10:56 PM Wonderfully detailed portrayal. Well done!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 16, 2012 at 8:34 PM congrats Kim on an awesome win for splendid words of Haiku luv..

Olusegun Arowolo March 16, 2012 at 12:47 AM Awesome write,Kim.congratulations on your win.

Poet Destroyer A March 15, 2012 at 10:31 PM KIM~.Congratulations ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

Black Eyed Susan March 12, 2012 at 9:21 AM "whirling dervish" -love it. delightfully desctructive!

Sara Kendrick March 11, 2012 at 12:27 PM Very expressive and descriptive work..I can just see the scene..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Reads like a winner for the contest..Good luck ...Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

Poet Destroyer A March 11, 2012 at 1:23 AM yes....love it...pd

Andrea Dietrich March 11, 2012 at 12:59 AM oh, i just love the sound of whirling dervish. GREAT job!!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 10, 2012 at 10:04 PM An ominous scene! Great haiku, Kim...best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda

Anne-Lise Andresen March 10, 2012 at 2:38 PM Well done Kim - Luck to you in PD contest! - oxox love Anne-Lise