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Nature the Destroyer

daytime sky goes dark lightning strikes as thunder roars -- hail peppers the ground ominous clouds churn whirling dervish touches down -- total destruction 3/10/12 Kim Merryman For PD's Nature the Destroyer Haiku Form only contest

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Date: 3/23/2012 3:55:00 PM
congrats on your win in pd's contest; vivid images of a storm, I particularly like "hail peppers the ground" :)
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Date: 3/23/2012 1:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Nature The Destroyer" contest Kim. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/23/2012 10:18:00 AM
Kim, Congratulations on your win in the contest...Marty
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Date: 3/19/2012 5:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in this contest Kim. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/16/2012 10:56:00 PM
Wonderfully detailed portrayal. Well done!
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Date: 3/16/2012 8:34:00 PM
congrats Kim on an awesome win for splendid words of Haiku luv..
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Date: 3/16/2012 12:47:00 AM
Awesome write,Kim.congratulations on your win.
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Date: 3/15/2012 10:31:00 PM
KIM~.Congratulations ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD
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Date: 3/12/2012 9:21:00 AM
"whirling dervish" -love it. delightfully desctructive!
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Date: 3/11/2012 12:27:00 PM
Very expressive and descriptive work..I can just see the scene..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Reads like a winner for the contest..Good luck ...Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
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Date: 3/11/2012 1:23:00 AM
yes....love it...pd
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Date: 3/11/2012 12:59:00 AM
oh, i just love the sound of whirling dervish. GREAT job!!
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Date: 3/10/2012 10:04:00 PM
An ominous scene! Great haiku, Kim...best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 3/10/2012 2:38:00 PM
Well done Kim - Luck to you in PD contest! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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