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Nature the Destroyer

daytime sky goes dark lightning strikes as thunder roars -- hail peppers the ground ominous clouds churn whirling dervish touches down -- total destruction 3/10/12 Kim Merryman For PD's Nature the Destroyer Haiku Form only contest

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Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 3/23/2012 3:55:00 PM

congrats on your win in pd's contest; vivid images of a storm, I particularly like "hail peppers the ground" :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/23/2012 1:13:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Nature The Destroyer" contest Kim. Love, Carol

Marty Owens

Date: 3/23/2012 10:18:00 AM

Kim, Congratulations on your win in the contest...Marty

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/19/2012 5:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in this contest Kim. Love, Carol

Chuck Novotny

Date: 3/16/2012 10:56:00 PM

Wonderfully detailed portrayal. Well done!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/16/2012 8:34:00 PM

congrats Kim on an awesome win for splendid words of Haiku luv..

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 3/16/2012 12:47:00 AM

Awesome write,Kim.congratulations on your win.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2012 10:31:00 PM

KIM~.Congratulations ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 3/12/2012 9:21:00 AM

"whirling dervish" -love it. delightfully desctructive!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/11/2012 12:27:00 PM

Very expressive and descriptive work..I can just see the scene..I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Reads like a winner for the contest..Good luck ...Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/11/2012 1:23:00 AM

yes....love it...pd